nice, but not limericky.

too much time on your hands, apparently. Not very limericky.

last line should rhyme with the first two.

weak

I suppose its all in good fun. I was a smidge distracted by the lack of line break separating the rhymes in the 3rd line of each limerick.

Nicely done your a superhero of the decriptive. Please oblige me with perusing my work sometime, 'Carry On Nicholas' I can hear the cacle of Sid James in 'Hinnom'. -9-

Limericks use the distinctive rhyming scheme of a-a-b-b-a, where the first two lines set the scene, the third and fourth lines quickly twist things about, and the fifth line hammers the conclusion. (first, second, and fifth lines are trimeter, third and fourth are dimeter). this is from the help screen, not my original writing. Limericks focus on the absurd or the silly when they're not downright naughty.

rhyme scheme A+ line length A+ rhythm C (inconsistent stresses) meaning B Grade - 8

tremendously brave and reverent (sorry)...downright boy scouty, i must say!

I dont think this could bore hardly anyone unless they are tin men on a yellow brick road. Its a bit thin in parts but overall a good read, fairly forgettable but if someone wrote it for me I would be moved, but alas noone does, seen far worse than this so se7en

Well with the addition comes the need to turn this into a metaphor for two lovers...go to it.

Cum on now, that's just not appropriate. It's far too small for us to see.

Spider-Man-Arse-Bandit

very nicely done. bravo and two shakes.

knob? Also, I'm seeing a pattern here of people making fun of one another. I hope its all in good fun.

a bit wordy--it muddles up the pace.

boo! your kung-fu is no match for mine, jimmy-ma-bobbo. eat the pickle.

Well with the addition comes the need to turn this into a metaphor for two lovers...go to it.

Thats how marketing should be done. Horus I cannot access your frames on your site, I can see your brandoesque eyes but whats a goin on a here?

scary. sad. meritable.