-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on some deleted poem
11 Jan 2003, 9:42 AM
I am a button.
i liked it alot 9
I just realised that this is the best poeme on the site.
I had the instructions upside down so all I got was this sore ass
die angel die!!!!hahaha
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on P.L. I wrote this in seven minutes at 1:36am. But I hope You can get the gist by smlink84
11 Jan 2003, 8:05 AM
Great use of "blame" and "name" to rhyme with "shame"!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! I'M SURE YOU'LL BE A POPULAR POETE IN NO TIME!!!!11
I love your original use of "android" to rhyme with "paranoid". Are you a pro? You should get this published! 6/10!!
Excellent use of "failures" to rhyme with "victorious" -- GREAT WORK!
hahaha yeah I get it! asl?
"sometimes they are tangled in the plastic plants" is a great line. So beautiful, so haunting, so picturesque, so vivid -- are you a pro?
Okay, Dark Angel blows monkeys for a living.
Hang on, that's the truth...I need an insult!
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
11 Jan 2003, 8:47 AM
Darkangels face is like the north end of a south bound buffalo
Dark Angel is gayer the the Annual Bishops and choirboys over-night convention held at the YMCA in Paris. 0
Dark Angel is built upside-down, because food goes up his arse and crap comes out his mouth.
Sad.
Like it.
Dark Angel is full of shit poems.
Or is that just full of shit?
i d throw the chesseburger at the cheerleader
shows promise. I like "when all the flowers grow
tall enough to hide me"
and the last stanza works for me. Rock on.
a ten if I ever saw one.