Freethinker1602
on Fuck the system by which we live by Lucifer
12 Jan 2003, 8:03 AM
Hehehe. That was funny. I hope more People get to read this.
yeah. my oh my.
I'm impressed. I like this very much.
"The shark now swims the way he swam
when first his species learned to swim
and all of times strong calloused hands
have done their best to polish him."
That's great! One thing: "times" -> "time's"
Sounds better now, I think.
It's a little confusing to me, maybe I just need more coffee.
I like it, though.
quite good. feels like I'm driving down a nowhere road. here's an eight I found in my pocket.
"There is no stint so cluck boo and the mint" great line, i've never seen someone prophesise with a dislocated face. interesting.
what's this? your fucking ormolu.
You, Sir, are making a Mischiefe of yourself.
Decent work Georgia girl, some of your work reminds me on mine. Feel free to rank some of my poems.
Lucifer
on P.L. I wrote this in seven minutes at 1:36am. But I hope You can get the gist by smlink84
11 Jan 2003, 8:41 PM
7 minutes you say. That is sure to impress everyone that has the ability to appreciate things that don't make sense. It is a nice little diddy. -=Dark_Angel=- is so confusing. She disses the wierdest things,,, and now she turns around complements ppl? I thought she was sposed to dislike obvious talent?
after years of going steady
i knew that i had lost that should have been found.
Very Amusing
how can you make fun of aids, its a serious matter. how would you like if you had aids. how dare you? HOW DARE YOU
say....it's that a poem?
what in the world happened to this site?
please note: line 13 should read my oh my, how the time go by and line 14 should read when you're feeling high and feeling numb
you need a kazoo for the chorus.
Greeat