Or the way that she could go.

negritude prevails. total shit.

disney land.

look again. the scented lotions? they're missing.

A termagant in a jumpsuit. ???

dotard.

for fucks sake. i just heard the "it's a small world afterall" theme song to this, but god knows if i vote with bias they'll mock me. call me racist, and if i vote with awe and glossy eyes they'll say i'm a dolt. if you let your parents stand in the way of a nice rock hard black cock.than it wasn't love and you're a fool...do you know who "they" are? my shoe laces and zippers. 5..

add two lines and this would be a sonnet, maybe it already is??

radical. "SWAGGER AWARD FOR MISSILES AND JESUS IN A SUPER COMPACT HAIKU WITH EVEN A PEW TOO" nice one.

i have a rule against the word angel in poetry, but this is a masterful piece..have a 10.

yeah, thanks mom.you fucking ancient gorge in the side of my mind. can i get a little vagina juice to go with my gaea enima. yeah thanks mom. for your history too, and that lucky scarf. bitch. take all my tens like you burned my captain caveman doll..rotten snatch.w

i will give u a low mark to annoy u since i think i gave u a high one last time its stupid to post it again

this is really good i think and im not just saying that! its a completly different line to any thing else ive seen u write! 8

Is it the kilt that is handy? or something else? v gd tho

very sad, those poor birds! very good poem, although slightly disturbing ill give it a 9, not a 10 as nothing deserves a 10

i like this one alot i reallly really like this one, im not just being nice, this one is really good, an easy 9

so, you did fuckface below with no qualms, but -dashed- the fuckings in the poem?Also: do you think you're clever and subtextual? let me kbow..these things facinate me. that and goat cheese.

i've found you four titles. !)machine-readable 2)syncopation 3)Has anyone seen my pants. 4)i bought a cat named rat what do you think?$

worthwhile.

beautiful