Tintagiles
on some deleted poem
31 Dec 2002, 10:10 PM
I have a slight problem with this: it tells us nothing we didn't know already,
Nice idea, badly done.
Great. How sad it applies to this site, and all who dwell in it.
jimmy-ma-bob, i think it is you. zombies fucking rock.
suckin' the big one. jimmy-ma-bob, your kung-fu is no good. no happy ending for you.
The devil may know, the devil may care, and the devil may damn you straight to hell. And I most certainly hope he will. Sinatra is dead because he was old. And a smarmy crooner who stole songs. And very, very boring.
Except for the bit about you. Which I highly, highly doubt.
Oh, by the way, we are now official a married gay couple. The Pope said it was ok if I didn't say about the child abuse he gave you.
This reminds me of that "hamish hamish bo-bamish fanafanafo-famish me-mi-mo-mamish: hamish" thing, except it would be impossible to do with Nyarlathotep. AAAA+++++ WOULD BUY AGAIN.
This is nice. I can see where you are coming from with the form aspect. Nice job...time for me to read up a bit more.
I particularly like the last stanza. It tells me the storm was a financial or political storm or a mass of people. Not horrible weather. I picture an old church or building with gargoyles. I dinged you two for the "sale".
What happened? Your muse go flat?
har har.
Is he the brother of Imoteph?
go on wit yo bad self.
meat-o-riffic. happy new year's, all.
Ouch.
well, somebody's cranky. where's the love. p&k, all, what say we teach this bob-o the true meaning of xmas?
settle, your kung-fu is no good.
Never speak to me again.