blkarakagain
on some deleted poem
31 Dec 2002, 12:10 PM
I like it; 'his atonement' is nice.
-=Unperceptive_and_forumlaic=-
Are you being sarcastic?
Ha ha ha!
The ending is a bit abrupt, I'm guilty of that kinda' thing myself. I like it, it's very thought inspiring, and very near profound, and it flows well. A nice use of words.
I wish I felt strongly about things.
This is not your finest work, but it is still a
I think what you've done there is confused "poetry" with "prose". It's an easy mistake to make. 10!!!
i dont know...i guess its too unemotional for me...im not much of a reader for "landscape poetry"...5
i love the images, and those last two lines end it perfectly...8
thats a very interesting idea...crazy...but i like it...9
where ever did you get the inspiration for this poem?!? gotta appreciate virgin girls with emerald eyes such as myself...
He has a poetandknowit
Why is poetandknowit Poemranker's godfather? I would hate to have a godfather who baselessly criticises all my family. But I suppose that's just me.
What's that all about?
Is this Settle or Bobjim? (ha)
Shall we see if we can get this into the top fifteen? Or is that just me being a joker?
nice...8
Dark AND shiny. Is that possible?