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wOrnella Mutiw on Mirth by Bobjim the II 30 Dec 2002, 3:21 PM
Are you Settle's midget lover, Gabriel? If not, the two of you should get together.
INTRANSIT on Instantly by Quarton 30 Dec 2002, 1:54 PM
No matter how fast we move, Q, we're still too damn slow. Loved S-3. Big number.
INTRANSIT on some deleted poem 30 Dec 2002, 1:29 PM
2 tings. I hate "Diva",but that's personal. S-3 L-5 You're? Otherwise, a keeper.
<~> on some deleted poem 30 Dec 2002, 1:38 PM
caducus--i think you mean 'breath bated'--as in the shortened form of 'abated'--unless there was chum involved...
blkarak on some deleted poem 30 Dec 2002, 12:55 PM
Awesome!
Bachus on Bumming kiddies by Bobjim 30 Dec 2002, 1:01 PM
again i must block. you see, i'm a semipermeable membrane, and since you didn't bum the cat. no osmosis
INTRANSIT on some deleted poem 30 Dec 2002, 1:42 PM
I think the last stanza could stand alone. More stuff here than you need methinks. Still.....
blkarak on some deleted poem 30 Dec 2002, 12:49 PM
I agree with ranger, this is quite good; Somber, thoughtful, and beautiful.
blkarak on Bumming kiddies by Bobjim 30 Dec 2002, 12:50 PM
whoever you are you're horrible and full af hate and bitterness. Go kill yourself.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Ode to -=Dick_Angle=- by Bobjim the II 30 Dec 2002, 12:48 PM
this takes 'worst' to new 'fathoms' that's why i have to give it a ten. see, it's like this bob jim. you have to get jumped in to join the bad boy on boy club. you can't circumnavigate the pecking order now..who's -=Dick_Angle=- ? ha ha HAAAAA HA HA! you are asking for trouble i don't think your ass can cash? nevermind.u
blkarak on some deleted poem 30 Dec 2002, 12:52 PM
Good stuff.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Ode to poetandknowit by Bobjim the II 30 Dec 2002, 2:15 PM
goats should be goaties. "they kill for food" "that's what keeps them going" dawn of the dead-1982. goerge romero.
INTRANSIT on some deleted poem 30 Dec 2002, 1:46 PM
Well, Um, I didn't care much for the ending. And I think you could cut some of the wordiness. Definitely workable.
INTRANSIT on some deleted poem 30 Dec 2002, 2:02 PM
This rolls very well.
wOrnella Mutiw on SEX by blkarak 30 Dec 2002, 3:31 PM
Mmmmmmm...I like it. Lust one of the seven deadly sins...the one I am least guilty of, unfortunately. You're in NC...where? I went to school in NC. You should go to Chapel Hill...great college town. Also, there is a place called Henry's Bistro in Chapel Hill on Rosemary Street...it's my most favorite place in the world....it's this ecclectic bistro full of writers, actors, foreigners...it's great...a lot of culture....great art on the walls and great music. You should definitely check it out, if you can. Tuesday night is the best....
INTRANSIT on some deleted poem 30 Dec 2002, 1:59 PM
Both pieces seem to talk about you. I see some talent, spread it around.
-=SeTTle=- on some deleted poem 30 Dec 2002, 1:21 PM
So wait some dyke bought you ten drinks and you threw a prozac panic attack??????????????????????????????????????????????????? CLARITY ABOVE ALL ELSE CLARITY IS WHAT WE VALUE IN THE GUILD OF GLASSMAKERS.T
INTRANSIT on some deleted poem 30 Dec 2002, 1:22 PM
Fun and truthful:) I likes. Nicely done Mrs. G
INTRANSIT on Blues by Christof 30 Dec 2002, 1:25 PM
fan TASTIQUE!
wOrnella Mutiw on Nature's Plague by blkarak 30 Dec 2002, 3:24 PM
I liked it but I think you should shorten it a bit...7