Caducus
on some deleted poem
30 Dec 2002, 8:48 AM
Non Conformist poetry yet it kicks like a mule in places and i can respect that -7-
This is your best so far, decorative non demanding poetry leaving a guy at work wanting to get the fuck outta here -7-
a 10 a 2 a 6 bloody hell whats this voting system like on ranker?
heres my frankincense ....9
like this
Gaping wounds of scorn, you were just getting going and it was all over (typical) have an 8
I wrote serpent of my bliss based on this (behold a short poem in telling you)
this is beautiful.
peace and love peace and love peace and love
At best - mediocre
At worst - boring
I have seen what you can do
I was drawn back to reading this again. In my humble opinion this is the most humorous, playful one I have read from you and kind of self mocking, a very pleasing alluring read that adds a new color to your rainbow. Now I'm going to gorge on a whole cherry morello pie with caramel cream and watch 'The Office' back to back ( do you have the office its hilarious I believe its one of the UK's few exports to the UsA?
Go away and die
This is fantastic. Lines 5 and 6 are brilliant, I really like your poetry and this is the best of yours.
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And by the way, this appears to be both an ode and a free verse. Explain?
the last line is what makes the poem...it just jumps at you. I kinda like it.