Christof
on Brackish by <~>
30 Dec 2002, 3:46 AM
This is expansive and wonderful - 'frugal wisdom' I like a lot and the general sensual realism of it. Top stuff.
Think. Feel. Explore.
wOrnella Mutiw
on I have reinvented the haiku and made it my own, becoming the world's first haiku gangsta in the process so you all had better just get it over with and give this 'ku a big fat TEN? by bondjedi
30 Dec 2002, 4:28 AM
you better take some ku lessons from snoop, or me of course.
With a name like Bob Jim it wouldn't surprise me one bit if you really were a paedophile...getting off on little kiddies...I see you've been hanging out with Pee Wee...what do you guys talk about...which 5 years old is hotter?...sick shit
undemanding ditty, this rocked my cradle gently (7) farewell rangerdude
9999999999999999999999999999999999999999 9999999999999 for you
Wow ! a rhyme from Gods Wife, I'm calling the cops.
should totured be tortured?
Liked stanza one as an intro, but this is just one long intro with no subject, are you looking for a date?
Fresh
Read my poem entitled Blue Balls....this is good.. you get 8.5
Are you a schitz? Read Angel Head, an awesome book dealing with the life of one. But as far as your poem goes...it rings true...and anything true deserves my higest mark...10.
This is crazed and funny. I don't know what a Winter Muse Fighter might look like, but they sound sneaky and unreliable.
Great use of 'look' to rhyme with 'book'!!!
now it's time to say....Go get me a dirty martini biatch...
lol!
NEVER! my trout. my precious.
lovely
you like the word 'pucker'