<{Baba^Yaga}>
on I have reinvented the haiku and made it my own, becoming the world's first haiku gangsta in the process so you all had better just get it over with and give this 'ku a big fat TEN? by bondjedi
29 Dec 2002, 12:14 PM
the best thing about this? the word 'ku. that is all. carry on
<{Baba^Yaga}>
on a haiku for all you traditionalists, and after you're done reading it you can eat my shorts by bondjedi
29 Dec 2002, 12:16 PM
you rebel, you. i have an asian detector built in shimmy rod, but allas my fuse has fizzled again. looks like you are on your own.
i was thinking to myself, that's a bold faced lie. then i looked down at my hands rolling my morning joint and then i lick sealed its freshness with a wee snicker. one puff two puff three puff whore! ornella doesn't belong here. she doesn't have enough poetry, and she doesn't have any furniture either.
regal
Poetandknowit may be annoying
Hourus8 might well be permanently stoned
Blade definately ISN'T talented
I don't know whether Ornellamuti is obese
Settle is egotistical
Zzinnia hasn't shown any signs of being a stuck up bitch
Basically my question here is...SO?
That wouldn't do at all. This is a fine piece of work and I like it a lot, whether that means anything or not I don't know.
I have never seen poetandknowit give praise to any poem, please somebody point me in the right direction.
Anyway, I digress, good work 9
This is really, really good. I love it.
Ranger
on I have reinvented the haiku and made it my own, becoming the world's first haiku gangsta in the process so you all had better just get it over with and give this 'ku a big fat TEN? by bondjedi
29 Dec 2002, 1:47 PM
Aaarrgghh, my eyes, my beautiful eyes...
don't hate my face, hate my nipples and my handcrafted mail box.
Bachus
on Diseases dug out with acceptance and the futility of analyzation unless it's at a poetic discourse by A. Nomaly
29 Dec 2002, 2:34 PM
<poets should not be doctors> invisible ink, and tofu.
SWAGGER AWARD FOR HERBAL IMPLAMENTATIONS AND CONIFERS.
this is the first free verse that i've read AND loved!
A very interesting allusion, does it pertain to a memory?
more utopians. jesus.
i agree with the others...this is good!
thesuarus!!
If only my stained quilt was as charming as yours. Why, just this very morn Quilt refused to engage the Automatic Lubrication Harness in order to perform my daily Embrowning Ritual! Needless to say, such impertinence is simply unbearable to a Gentleman of my Grace and Splendour. Good day to you, Sir!
Nowhere near as good as some of your other stuff, DA. It just seems to be going a bit too far with the bum jokes. Still mildly amusing first time round. Am I wrong in assuming that Settle has something to do with the large number of tens, which are, coincidentally anonymous?
Great! Eight! I'm a poet and I don't...aargh
malchovich..malchovich..malchovich.p
this is very cool...and i do think the periods are charming!