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Bachus on When I wake... by Topaz Servias 28 Dec 2002, 8:00 PM
that was lip cervasa.???
Bachus on Shackles of Reality by rick 28 Dec 2002, 8:05 PM
no rick, but your face is.b
nentwined on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8 28 Dec 2002, 4:56 PM
veddy veddy nice.
horus8 on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit 28 Dec 2002, 8:51 PM
one of the ten best poems on this site. hands down. if not, than the best in the subject it deals upon.
horus8 on Mountain Ash, Mid Glamorgan by Nicholas Jones 28 Dec 2002, 5:57 PM
beautiful.
poetandknowit on some deleted poem 28 Dec 2002, 6:38 PM
You have obviously been hanging out with GW or this is just a southern California thing..
Bachus on Drinker's Haiku by cacophony 28 Dec 2002, 8:05 PM
reverse psykoolidgy.
poetandknowit on some deleted poem 28 Dec 2002, 7:49 PM
Why is a clear sky "sullen"? What is a "patch of dreams"? What does "With in my hands" mean? Do you mean "within"? Tears "is"? Is it just one tear? The dentures part crack me up and for that I will give you a point and then take it away because of the horrific last line.
==Doylum on the rapier by <~> 28 Dec 2002, 7:53 PM
where do all commetns go when they die? where ae your mention of aids? lightening fast as they all should be where is your verse about Botte de Nuit?
poetandknowit on me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection by lunar 28 Dec 2002, 11:19 PM
So are you like getting married now. And is this a poem or a journal entry? Do you really need to have a connection with someone to talk about heaven and hell? There is a restaurant down the street from my house. Most likely 50 paces. I bet I could run down there now, sit at the bar, and after a drink just to establish my presence could bring up heaven or hell or god or sex or any other subject without having a connection with the person I brought it up to. It is called conversation with a stranger. Are you like 15 and tied to your hormones, because if so, then forgive me. Everything at that age is so dramatic. It is life without a soundtrack.
Bachus on some deleted poem 28 Dec 2002, 8:03 PM
jesus christ you're fucking amazing, and your shimmy...geez, it glistens like a slug on a beer can.???
==Doylum on some deleted poem 28 Dec 2002, 6:57 PM
what does blue balls mean? why oddly? were you sitting or lying? ARE YOU A HAIRY BOTTER?
nentwined on some deleted poem 28 Dec 2002, 3:25 PM
Excuding -> Exuding. the second to last stanza stumbles for me. it feels like too much "and now a pause for reflection" -- maybe skinning it some and breaking it apart would help. I like the piece overall, and the end cinches it well.
smlink84 on The canary's last song by <{Baba^Yaga}> 28 Dec 2002, 6:47 PM
"melody in a cage", I like the metaphor. Do You like Robert Frost?
smlink84 on Gone by Katie2 28 Dec 2002, 6:49 PM
Interesting. It would be better if you used more imagery and weren't so blunt about it.
smlink84 on Maria by Nicholas Monson 28 Dec 2002, 7:09 PM
Very NIce, "Whom is the correct grammar", don't worry. I also feel that" Then I first espied her. She had beauty to excess! A laugh to shiver spines - A Galician princess. What mystic Yorkshire root Was stirred in quiemada? What supernatural spice Was robbed from heaven's larder?" is very descriptive in imagery.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Gone by Katie2 28 Dec 2002, 5:21 PM
yodeling in the valley. a delicious break from potatos.$
nentwined on some deleted poem 28 Dec 2002, 4:59 PM
ermp? very nice.
wOrnella Mutiw on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8 28 Dec 2002, 6:33 PM
Lolipop...I like this....one of my favorite songs, My Michelle..good old GNR....9
Bachus on some deleted poem 28 Dec 2002, 7:55 PM
settle. i must tell you the truth....i'm Tom York. http://www.gangbox.com/mp3/Ho'ope%20ia%20e%20kahuna%20kai%20o.mp3