rockinindividual
on some deleted poem
24 Dec 2002, 6:08 PM
vulgar and unexpected...but catchy in a sense ((somewhat like eminem (((who i dislike)))))
We here can only pray and hope.
that was lovely. merry x~mas.
hahaha thats really cute, and the rhyme scheme is done quite nicely
dark helmit? will you tighten my helmet? just..you..know..let me know if i'm wearing it right?
"fear on your forehead
terror between your teeth" damn fine statement here lol. wow. you took me there p&k you really dud. did i mean.
whoops sorry, maybe not. i'll fix that zero later for you.
interesting... let me know when you're completely done... it reads as though there is still some work to be done... wonderful beginning phase though...
again, another that seems to be a wonderful work in the making... you show amazing promise, yet some refining is in order...
i do truly hope this was intended in jest... it is a negative contrast to your other postings... your sobriety during composition is questioned...
a good laugh, yet possible that a real "poem" lies within... continued work is highly recommended...
so who is she???
you have a yeast infection, and PMS. see your local chemist for some OTC relief. everyone will thank you.
typos tiepoes ti-poas
better still. but a falcon and a fog? they are at different metaphorical ends of the spectrum. did you mean to do that?
What more can you expect from a dope smoking, sandal wearing, frat boy...you have as much intelligence as my big toe nail....2
it is often hard to judge works with a religious base, simply due to the fact that i know not your own faith, or lack of... however, as a work, this is very intriguing... i do not often enjoy poems that rip off songs, but this one catches my eye... it is your own, but i still prefer the original...
that picture on your website is priceless just hilarious. for the love of god, the nubs, the masks, the beauty. Also the heinieken shot wasn't bad either. lol. also your poem left a bit confused, and i find that odd. some nice rhymes though..
good thing he didn't take your womb too. then you'd be in serious shit.