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horus8 on pissed off pretentious prat by keatsImnot 22 Dec 2002, 10:48 AM

let this prat be me.

horus8 on some deleted poem 22 Dec 2002, 10:06 AM

a vibrator's muffled in the darkness. this glass of water has no sides. retreat.return. recede. rerun. tourqouise turnips.

blkarakagain on missing time by Bill Z Bub 22 Dec 2002, 10:57 AM

Awesome!

Ranger on affirmative action by thelonefrobros 22 Dec 2002, 5:09 AM

Damn it, it didn't work.

Ranger on some deleted poem 22 Dec 2002, 5:17 AM

Brilliant.

aliena on missing time by Bill Z Bub 22 Dec 2002, 9:07 AM

Excellent!

aliena on One by adrenalize 22 Dec 2002, 9:12 AM

good sentiment,amen

horus8 on First move by aliena 22 Dec 2002, 10:02 AM

"I want to cheer up you", don't fucking bother, my hatred keeps me sharp, and built for war, as for you? i pray they find you with their brick bats soon.

blkarakagain on some deleted poem 22 Dec 2002, 11:08 AM

"Damnitalltohell," The world has no business being alright when my life is fucked up. I agree! Destroy the moon, goddamnit, destroy the world, despite midnight's plans unfurled, despite the plans for divine grace, in this at least I'll save face.-9

blkarakagain on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub 22 Dec 2002, 11:10 AM

Nice.

wOrnella Mutiw on some deleted poem 21 Dec 2002, 11:19 PM

You've got to be kidding me...this is horrible...you get a -1. Stick to tractor driving, oreo eating, and pigeon watching...smooches

Ranger on some deleted poem 22 Dec 2002, 4:51 AM

Yes, but don't tell anyone...shh

Ranger on some deleted poem 22 Dec 2002, 4:54 AM

Marvellous, almost feel it deserves a ten...but that's just the reply I'm talking about. Are you Blade in disguise? No, Blade's not that cunning...

Ranger on missing time by Bill Z Bub 22 Dec 2002, 4:59 AM

Ah yes, possibly the best work today...have a nine.

Ranger on affirmative action by thelonefrobros 22 Dec 2002, 5:08 AM

Dear God. I would give this a zero but that would risk you replacing Blade at the bottom. Instead I think I shall give it a ten, which will hopefully lift you out of the bottom fifteen so we NEVER HAVE TO SEE THIS PILE OF SHITE AGAIN! And breathe.

horus8 on some deleted poem 22 Dec 2002, 10:09 AM

first off, an apple? lol. secondly, shame is the least of your worries. apple!? everyone knows it was an premature prawne on mushrooms 'fly agaric? soma? read.

horus8 on The Sons and Daughters of the New Light by Bonehiss 22 Dec 2002, 10:14 AM

this is the age of Horus! not the star children play patty cake. this piece suprised me...going into it, because of the title, i wanted so badly to hate it, than i did, but it's not bad for a first draft.

Dan garcia-Black on some deleted poem 22 Dec 2002, 8:41 AM

Good but could use a more lovable protagonist.

aliena on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub 22 Dec 2002, 8:59 AM

Interesting. I liked the bit about the cell phone.

Ranger on joyriding by Bill Z Bub 22 Dec 2002, 5:04 AM

This is good, very good. 10