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poetandknowit on Mum why are grandmas arms so baggy? by ==Doylum 12 Dec 2002, 6:27 PM

Fly where?

Caducus on Bliss without the Mistress by rlorrah 13 Dec 2002, 2:16 AM

Like it, have you ever had bliss WITH the mistress, now theirs a poem?

Caducus on On a chill morning by razorgrin 13 Dec 2002, 3:47 AM

Fantsastico !

Ranger on To Kiss by Jody Conn 13 Dec 2002, 4:23 AM

So, horus8 and poetandknowit, care to explain the problems with this? Constructive criticism is part of what this site's about.

Ranger on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit 13 Dec 2002, 4:28 AM

Fair doos

Caducus on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus 13 Dec 2002, 6:24 AM

Transformer Smurf ? just a disturbing idea

Ranger on West Sands, late afternoon in winter by Nicholas Jones 13 Dec 2002, 4:30 AM

Hee hee hee

Tintagiles on some deleted poem 12 Dec 2002, 9:10 PM

Brava, signorina, brava. Perdona le mio atroce Italiano, te pregha, non so perche io le parla, mah bah. Though I might mentio nthat 'sapphire' has two 'p's, just because I'm a pedant.

Caducus on some deleted poem 13 Dec 2002, 2:48 AM

You could fine tune this, also i'd lose the hard girl vibe in this and add some vulnerability it reads like you've got too much attitude, mix the bag add some heart to it, it sounds like your hiding stuff, your writings good by the way but it left me unsatisfied. **5**

Caducus on Prize gained life, Death in wages by GTK 13 Dec 2002, 2:52 AM

Affecting ! check line one though shouldn't bath be bathe?

Caducus on some deleted poem 13 Dec 2002, 2:14 AM

As i read this i thought of a line that makes no sense at all for a poem 'take a slice of my life and add it to drink, take a husband and wife, what do you think ? weird, but it made me think albeit i'm scaring myself -nice job as usual

Caducus on Some asshole with a shit band. by Plasticgirlwithgun 13 Dec 2002, 2:20 AM

Deliciously evil and bitchy, shoot me in slow mo plasticgirl

Caducus on Mum why are grandmas arms so baggy? by ==Doylum 13 Dec 2002, 2:22 AM

ahhhh the most wicked of all haikus, this made me crack up to the point of snotting all over my face so thank you for making me feel so fucking attractive. -10- go granny

Caducus on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 13 Dec 2002, 2:25 AM

Bought back bad memories of the 'probe violation' i suffered at the hands of Darth Invader, hes a dirty bastard.

Caducus on some deleted poem 13 Dec 2002, 2:44 AM

welcome back oh dark one

Bachus on Hunt <3 by Plasticgirlwithgun 12 Dec 2002, 6:03 PM

my father's advice to me was treat them bad they'll love you more, love them more they'll treat you bad. it's sad really, but with the right balance and timing true.e

Bachus on Fruit Punch by teacup 12 Dec 2002, 6:13 PM

ha as a aha ha! hee. ohhhh?s

Bachus on West Sands, late afternoon in winter by Nicholas Jones 12 Dec 2002, 6:15 PM

don't! the fish haven't eaten, and sadly do to the drought the water's only 6 inches deep.t

Bachus on Mum why are grandmas arms so baggy? by ==Doylum 12 Dec 2002, 6:20 PM

HOW DARE YE BESMIRCH THE MIGRATING ELDERLY! is there; heaven, bingo, and the four corners trip? i just bet.

poetandknowit on Mum why are grandmas arms so baggy? by ==Doylum 12 Dec 2002, 6:29 PM

I can see flying to bingo, but wisdom and retirement. That is stretching it. But then maybe you mean to the midlands or to the place where kitty went.