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<{Baba^Yaga}> on some deleted poem 13 Dec 2002, 7:09 PM
pupas that wear masks..are..um...cool.
god'swife on some deleted poem 13 Dec 2002, 6:12 PM
You are a gifted person. A "Don" we latins call it. This is filled with feeling and understanding. A pleasure to read again and again. God bless you Richa. Merry Fucking Christmas.
<~> on some deleted poem 13 Dec 2002, 6:19 PM
this is mythic. what does the title mean?
INTRANSIT on some deleted poem 13 Dec 2002, 5:49 PM
Be careful what you wish for, you almost got it. ...so my dispatcher calls me and says he has this load going from the windy to the mile high and then a load from denco to L.A. no shit. I turned it down. too close to christmas,truck is old and the possibility of weather . Maybe when the thaw comes I'll go west and we can consummate our little three way. But I owe zzinnia a visit first. TA! Oh, I like this little bit of yours too.
god'swife on Corny. by Plasticgirlwithgun 13 Dec 2002, 8:29 AM
Yeah, there is nothing cornier then a pierced septum!!??? Not to mention more poetic. why don't you get his name tattooed across the back of your neck.
this poem is my new jesus. the transformers totally ROCKED! The 80's ones, not the new stuff.10!
UnityMitford on Corny. by Plasticgirlwithgun 13 Dec 2002, 9:17 AM
if you put "pierced" in parentheses after "balls," it could really do something for me and my unpierced septum. i, personally, like guys and girls with pierced sternums. that is HOT!
<{Baba^Yaga}> on A hard life by INTRANSIT 13 Dec 2002, 7:07 PM
http://www.gangbox.com/mp3/thorn%20apple%20the%20baby%20fat.mp3 nice retouches here's a x-mas present. enjoy.
Bill Z Bub on some deleted poem 13 Dec 2002, 7:10 PM
wonderful visions what if it was Deganawidahianity? 9999999999999999999999999!
<~> on Mum why are grandmas arms so baggy? by ==Doylum 13 Dec 2002, 7:34 AM
i've seen it. but you get no lift from those elderwaffes. must be methane powered. very funny, speedy d.
Simon Cowell would die in his trousers over this
Well, I finally took the time to read through this, and was (of course) quite impressed. Irreverently comical, clever, and stylish. Excellent job.
Bachus on some deleted poem 13 Dec 2002, 10:12 PM
wicked, i mean holy...it's like the manapause files.
god'swife on Panning for gold by INTRANSIT 13 Dec 2002, 8:34 AM
I'm still not sure what all the metaphors represent.
<~> on some deleted poem 13 Dec 2002, 7:51 AM
She became for a moment what Magdalene had all those years. had been? had, for all... this is unclear to me. also, sapphire. (2 p's) why did she become 'without a mouth'? she could not speak? she was unkissed? is that why she asked him to wait? a little more, a little more. you need minor tweaking to make this radiant.
razorgrin on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 13 Dec 2002, 11:33 AM
Bill, as an unashamed UFO etc. devotee (but a skeptical one), I dig the references. Scully is a total and utter hottie. I'm not into David Lynch, but D&D is one of my guiltier pleasures. I like the poem.
Best bitchiness I've heard in a while. fun lovin' criminals are delightful.
razorgrin on some deleted poem 13 Dec 2002, 11:38 AM
a little different from your usual, but still mighty.
UnityMitford on some deleted poem 13 Dec 2002, 9:22 AM
nice. is the title a reference to faulkner, joe christmas, and the gang?