gorgeous just gorgeous i have panegyrics

more panegyrics lovely beautiful brilliant

there's nothing wrong with this poem. i assume the pros are being critical since most have forgotten why they even began to write poetry. it must have been to keep one's nose from dipping into one's beer.

chokers are best pressed than throttled. 9

nice for a story. I like "Damn"'s rang out and "What Happened," shocked us both. Those phrases as subjects did well.

vital to all poemrankers, a must read. hilarious and well layered, allows everyone to find something in comment with it. have a ten.

excellent

i caught an eighteen lb striper last spring..i thought it was a shark. no shit.

One of my absolute favorites. It reads aloud like an incantation. 10

my audition went well. better than i expected. whether i get it or not i'll sleep good tonight.h

beautifull, a hole in one, might be better if you refer to coke by its street name 'girl'. get some 'girl'.

an inner jubilee that has yet to touch my extremities..

cute. on st. patricks for lasses.t

also. nice title.i

don't be afraid to suck the laST sentence into the last stanza it fits fine. no osterization needed..

the lone strangeling hath spaken! 10.t

your originality is almost unbearable. almost.

your originality is almost unbearable. almost.

it peters a bit at the end, but it's a beauty, none the less. 9.

like fishing in the bering strait for eel.