horus8
on some deleted poem
10 Dec 2002, 12:08 PM
he shouldn't of put his potty stick there. hugh?
sweet water melon seeds they're everywhere!e
I like this; vivid and spare.
hurahh!
I'll love you
10 out of 10 out of 10 out of 10
yeppie
black and white and metallic sky. careen indeed. nicety-nice.
Whoes bi curious? You?
I think my cat might die tonight. Its an farm cat, its always lived outside in a breezeblock house i built for it, it can't come in the house since its been incontinent for the past 6 months. It won't even move for food. Who will fill my life with love when shes gone?
Will the loving community here on the ranker help me?
Stop shouting and playing with yer 36 double ee's and say something god damn it
God, not another terrible poem about "you know who".n
Ay, que poesia linda. Me hace quierar que le??do espa??ol mas mejor.
On second thought, make mine nine. This one still does it for me.
have you read the master and marguerrite? by michael bulgakov? have a ten.e
i have to agree wth d.a and gw (we were giggling about it while she was at my house just now) on this one, both of your attempts at spanish are umm well, whatever. better luck next time. have an eight for christmas.e
oddly dismal, yet compitent..you were right to put the italian version first. it's more potent than the english one.
Is scirocco Italian for (speed)?
I understand you must go some day please stay in touch with us 'rankers, won't you?
lunar
on Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
10 Dec 2002, 1:50 PM
me or horus8?
For some reason the image of crows fits very well with winter. Love the association you made with that.
Were you speaking of crows that migrate? Do they migrate?
you are a lot more peotry literate than me. yr poems sound like they are meant to be poems unlike mine which are just random thoughts
Very, fuckin' good
terribly fantastic.