poetandknowit
on some deleted poem
4 Dec 2002, 10:06 AM
Is this about god?
A circus of words!
Zzinnikins, this reminds me of everything, everyone.
horus8
on The wonderful happy relationship between two wonderful and caring people by Dark Angle
4 Dec 2002, 4:19 PM
finely crafted...like a deer antler pipe in the hand of a drueling lazy boy chaired drunk uncle.
How long did this take to write? And exactly what are you shooting for? Reaction? Abstraction? Realism? Surrealism? Warholism? Gymnasium? Is this the individual proletariats response to oppression in the work place? A response to a bar rejection? A failing grade? What do you mean. Do you want to start a revolution? Or are you just a young boy with nothing better to do and loads suburban angst?
squee! hobbes is strange. fun fun.
And what did he find in the other side? Everything he hoped for, or just some stupid girl wearing out her heels from kicking the bricks? She's pretty though, isn't she? Now they'll have each other to tear at.
that's awesome. i shall read it to the cat, who will purr, then attack the hallucinations from which she unfortunately suffers.
Really lovely. A good example of how a talented writer can wring the sweetness out of anything. I had a cat once with cerebral-palsy. She couldn't walk a straight line but still managed somehow. When every the phone rang she'd jump 6 ft. into the air.
I don't know what the fuck you are talking about. No matter. This is but a glimpse I am certain.
You have no children,and it shows.
A beginner should stick to what they know.
Did we all die and go to hell for a brief moment - or you have got some issues. Go out more.
COME ON! ALL ON A KISS?
Could you possibly make this an episode of Telli-Tubbies? I'm having troubling following along. Though I do agree with the first 20 stanzas. Tell me oh Dark One, how do I go about protecting myself without hurting others? I always assume a covenant is established between two parties without the words ever being spoken. A sensitive girl's folly.
this is so THICK
and nice
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on I Am A Poor Little Boy In The Land Of Love by sweetzephyr
4 Dec 2002, 3:46 PM
TRY AGAIN PLZ.
Okay, I'm probably being a dolt, but what's the shape supposed to convey?
A poem that starts well and s l o w ly poops. But I suppose that is the point. But could not that point be made with out dipping, say, in the toilet?
On another note: what happend the the hardcore be-bop, I'm-a-hardcore-cut-you-up-gangsta-london
Right at the end he gets the horn.
fantastic