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Nicholas Monson on Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell by Yardbird 4 Dec 2002, 4:24 AM

Very clever. Very thought-provoking.

Nicholas Jones on HATTIE by Nicholas Monson 4 Dec 2002, 5:12 AM

It makes a change from the usual crude sexual innuendo found on this site.

Tascobar on some deleted poem 4 Dec 2002, 4:28 AM

What the fuck? Ali G has had his day I'm afraid. 3.

INTRANSIT on want of warmth by <~> 4 Dec 2002, 4:30 AM

another one of your fab 2 way haiku

Tascobar on some deleted poem 4 Dec 2002, 4:26 AM

Too true, buddy, too true. 9. Page 3 ain't porn - it's just a great way to kill a few minutes.

Nicholas Monson on Ode to the Severn Bridge by Gwyrfab 4 Dec 2002, 4:22 AM

Heh and who gets more money per capita from Westminster AND Brussels - the English or the Welsh? Come on, you are above this petty nationalism. You are a good writer with some sensible targets. Hating the English is so parochial.

Tascobar on some deleted poem 4 Dec 2002, 4:33 AM

Fucking hell. I've experienced a lot of poems on this site. This is one of the best. A rare 10 from me.

Nicholas Monson on The ONE by Eline 4 Dec 2002, 4:35 AM

Is this a poem for Jesus? Very Biblical all this business of "chariot of light".

INTRANSIT on Poem For Times Such As These by Nicholas Jones 4 Dec 2002, 4:37 AM

ok then, how about this: thanks foor fucking up my only form of escapism! or, hows about we all ship over to iraq and put ourselves in the line of fire for a "good cause" instead of writing poetry that accomplishes NOTHING!!

Nicholas Monson on Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus 4 Dec 2002, 4:42 AM

Some misspellings here and a few creaky rhymes. But it has a faux naif appeal. (sorry to sound pretentious). The PS works well and has the ring (and sting) of truth.

Nicholas Monson on Feelings Inside by confuzdlilgirl 4 Dec 2002, 4:47 AM

Doesn't have the quality of some of your other poems. Metre is erratic. The rhymes could be improved. This is a draft to work on. Come on. You can do it.

Nicholas Monson on trapoide by Angel_of_fait 4 Dec 2002, 4:59 AM

Rap is as valid a format as a sonnet but it has to make sense. What Cat stole my reality? What do you mean by "not distressing your (my?) reality? A generation have fallen in love with the SOUND of words. They get off on alliteration and rhyme but many are guilty of failing to combine it with coherernce and meaning. Go on Victoria, rise up from rap lyrics, write poetry! You have a feeling for it. Go for it!

UAFANTHORPEY on some deleted poem 4 Dec 2002, 5:10 AM

Woah this poem is the chiznit bitch, i am actually a white guy called Colin and I too worship Noel Edwards. Noel Edwards is a sex god

Nicholas Monson on Suburban Horror by phbiscuit 4 Dec 2002, 4:14 AM

I love this. Sole flaw is the plural on speak (s). Could you re-work the line? Something like "Retreating when my neighbor cares to speak"

Nicholas Monson on The Dreamer by Nicholas Jones 4 Dec 2002, 4:16 AM

Quite lovely. I forgive you all the inexact rhymes

Nicholas Monson on i got a really big fan by Flattop 4 Dec 2002, 4:19 AM

Wonderful light verse

INTRANSIT on nothing, as today by <~> 4 Dec 2002, 4:41 AM

I'd say you were rightfully movedd.

Nicholas Monson on Walk in a dream (an ode to self help poems) by Bachus 4 Dec 2002, 4:50 AM

The South Park School of Poetry. Quite enchanting

Nicholas Monson on some deleted poem 4 Dec 2002, 4:38 AM

Very funny.

Nicholas Monson on The Nights Draw In by Nicholas Jones 4 Dec 2002, 5:04 AM

A lovely touch (again)