cool poem, but the title made me laugh so hard the first time i read it, i had to go back. (in-joke, long story..)

brilliant as always.

Wespect, G

Genius!!!!!!!!!!I love this

sounds like quite the evening.

top shelf! 8 swastikas!

Ha Ha Ha.Go away, you're giving me a headache

Not yet, but I didn't see the first one anyway

not as good as some of your others, but better than most things in this plane of existence.

Brilliant, but the line 'I am an investment banker' makes it slightly humorous though, and a lot less sinister.Can you dig that?

that bleach really seems to have inspired you. maybe you should try kerosene next time. i bet that would really get things going.

A one word rebuttal: "YOU."

Don't tell us somuch how you feel. Tellus what happened, you know, what the day was like, the color of his shoes, anything. If you show us what happened we'll know how you feel. Good Luck.

your line breaks don't make sense--bring the colors up onto the lines they modify, unless you have a reason for isolating them... and, what is it that makes you unhappy now? maybe close with that.

this is very funny. i had no idea that nicholas jones was such a resource for the poet in you.

are you secretly in love with NJ? and trying to come out to the poemranker community?

maybe you should try it, and write a poem about it....

It's Samuel L.Jackson isn't it??? He's obviously annoyed you somewhat

was that the urinal cake that jake ate?

story-like and good.