some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 3:14 PM
oh please!!!
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 2:39 PM
umm again pointless (much like the existance of a red neck) another zero for you
Well i would say this is good, but for one minor flaw... all of it
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 3:00 PM
are you a pedo dark angel? i mean i know you shagged your pigs on your ranch (obviously has one hes a red neck texan) and you obviously shagged your aunty (i mean red necks are the result of inncest arnt they?), anyway just wondering if you fucked children as well?
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 3:02 PM
if this about you? you seem the king of autobigraphical poems
do oyu even understand what Aquired Immuno Diffcientcy Syndrome is? or are just an ignorant red neck?
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 3:07 PM
His poem is an arse rapping money with rabbies, and a ponchuan for his own seminal fluid
your a completely moronic idiot arnt you hmm remind me of dark angel
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 3:15 PM
attually if this is true that deserves a darwin award, but you deserve a smegma award for the shti you write dark angel
beuatiful i loved every word of it i wish ther was a possibility to vote above ten cos it just doesnt seem to do it justice
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 3:22 PM
i think its attually quite good considering that its on this site (infact its the best thing on this stie and up to commerical standard); now a word to the author, please write morel iek this i love it
eriee, haunting, excelent, all these dont it justice, it just is prefection in its depressingness, love your poetry
razorgrin seems mentally retarded he cant recognise good poetry, thenagian you should his, thats probably why
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 2:35 PM
to be honnest this is pretentious fucked up red neck incetous pig fucking shit; to be kind, this needs some work, but could be good (if completely replaced by something not made by a red neck)
what the fuck is "incetous" supposed to be? learn new words besides red neck, you look like a schmuck, eskimo.
melinda, you know, if you were a necropheliac this sort of thing wouldn't be your problem. You'd still write really crap poetry, but you'd be able to get some from Mr. dead guy.
stop whining and learn to spell, kid.
is english not your first language? If it is,then you have an excuse for this atrocity of a poeme.
I see you. I'm not very impressed. those pants make your butt look fat.
some deleted user
on Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
26 Nov 2002, 3:09 PM
you must get out more