some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 1:03 PM
gd stuff
i prefer mine with a nice chianti.
what the hell are soulless goats? are you taking cheapshots at arabs again? as for the rest, i like the last stanza quite a bit, although "scary things" is a little weak. 6 swastikas!
I've got shasta daisies--in two locations--still going strong, along with aforementioned alyssum. (The cosmos gave up the ghost though.)
still other times it seems like you might have dropped it on the floor before you ever did much with it. so goes it for this bit of metapoetry. 4 swastikas :(
"Between carriages and creamsicles" raises a splendid image, your firststanza is weak, and of course junipers and scary things takes a huge bite out of crime. last stanza's mediocre compared...placate? that's funny. you're funny mr.foster. i'm not.
try www.spaceshuttleguest.com. enjoy your 7.
doug soderstrom would really like this poem. here let me e-mail it to him. 6.t
in st louis this may, they had a 'hottest mom' contest. were you there? because it seemed like they wouldn't be keeping their pants up, from the tone of the ad.
eerrrmmmm maybe you should elaborate that point i dont think lyrics are that short apart from slipknot ones
what is wrong with you people the only good line is "It can't just say a little 'Goodbye'" the rest is BS
this is ridiculous how can you call this poetry poetry is from the heart not a year 2 essay on wot my favourite hobby is
Well ill give you 2 for effort (all 2 minutes of it) and ill give you 1 for the poem as it has basic (very basic) poetic forms of rhyme and rhythm, therefore i give it a grand total (soo dosnt deserve this much) of 3
Who? = you
What?= sanity
Where?=thats the problem
Why?=fuck know but you are
How?= could be brain damage
oh and i have just told you doe that make you happy?
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 2:19 PM
please pass the salt, im gonna need alot if you think ill eat that shit!!!
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 2:28 PM
Umm to be honnest i havnt zombie flesh eaters (suprsingly) im guessing its a trashy american film, the kind of film bush would watch while fucking his poodle (tony blair). Well apart from the fact its based on a shit film, it has no merit in its self cause your a red neck american
WOW!!! Love it.....What an amazing mind *smiles*
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 2:30 PM
NO YOU FOOL!!!! ok even though your a red neck, this shows promise if the end was more depressing and sad!!! my vote at the moment is 1 (most im gonna give you for a happy poem)
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 2:31 PM
FUCKED UP REDNECK SHIT!!!!
damn redneks