rather trite. rather redundant. try for fresher images.

and i hear sheis insatiable.

I like it a lot.

i have an Alusian named Calendula! 8 swastikas!

coo'. I'm entertained.

yep, that's a small town alright. cool.

Ice-winged, she hides Mrs. bi-valve, wasteful; but she will not get her pearl.

chickens is yummy critters.

did you know that the komodo dragon can run up to thirty miles per hour, and has acidic bacterial infested saliva? better forget about the pickle and hide your chickens. Because breakfast sucks without eggs. take an 8.

they can also break a man's leg with one mighty tail swipe. komodo dragons are my favourite critters after kitties and spiders.

end with "fine" or "be", probably "be" is stronger or maybe, and then we'll see (as an added line) ah fuckit...it just left me a little wet in the vagina (blue balled) but mayhaps was the point 8.

Beautiful.

muddled and aloof.6.

cool and calculated...a real savy tournequette. 9.

like how red blood cells are made....in the marrow.

I like the mystery

The first stanza is sweet, how about working on the second?

this is amazing...until the last two stanzas. i think your ire got the better of you and you let the words get away from you a little. knowing you, you probably did it on purpose and i'm missing the point.

phish show?

no soup for you!