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Ranger on some deleted poem 26 Nov 2002, 6:22 AM
OUT! Love-Fifteen!
Caducus on Maliced flame by T'ien 26 Nov 2002, 4:31 AM
Not a bad 'ad break' read *6*
<~> on some deleted poem 26 Nov 2002, 6:50 AM
jesu christu! make the ganglia twitch! beneath that sultry exterior, the slowed beat of an icy heart... nice rewrite, dewd.
Caducus on some deleted poem 26 Nov 2002, 4:36 AM
Bollocks to her age let it go ! this poem is timeless, but Ms Calvetti (sounds like a tennis player) if you are lying about your age Bachus will get the secret agent smurf to find out
Caducus on Liar by Goose 26 Nov 2002, 3:54 AM
This would be better as a Haiku, as it stands its still good but I would be interested to see how much more you could say with less. Hope I haven't cooked your goose, Mr Goose -7-
Caducus on Cocky by Goose 26 Nov 2002, 3:55 AM
West Side !
Caducus on some deleted poem 26 Nov 2002, 4:00 AM
here a 7 for being so cult about the occult
Caducus on some deleted poem 26 Nov 2002, 4:28 AM
This was like fucking the ice queen from narnia (Cool as a fuck) so take this fat lady and give her a hug *8* BINGO.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Perversions by razorgrin 26 Nov 2002, 4:15 AM
For some reason I didn't see this up until now. You win the prize. Vore and fisting are two of the greatest sexual deviances of all time, although Roman Showers are a bit sick. HA HA HA
Caducus on Another Chance by Bonehiss 26 Nov 2002, 5:40 AM
I always find it difficult to rate your work as your obviously a hopeless romantic, who writes unchallenging, simple writings. I'm giving you a 6 on this because their is a purity to your work. However I have to criticize you on one aspect and that is the lack of originality in your work, it is a very basic 'greeting card' style with little fibre and alluring qualities. Fair play to you though, none of us here are Hemingway at the moment, just lose yourself more in your imagination and you'll find more satisfaction in your creativity.
Caducus on What's the Point of Love? by loneshadow29 26 Nov 2002, 5:46 AM
The point of love is the 'falling' as it grounds you. Love is A heroic loser seeded within the pounding pastures of our crimson core. (at least you got me inspired)
Caducus on The Abyss of myself by ciantu 26 Nov 2002, 5:57 AM
I've been saying this shit for years. Every now and then i read something on this site and it restores my faith in the human condition, you sir are ahead of your time with this poem, stanza 2 is right their kicking like a mule. *9*
Ranger on The Sands Of Galway by Caducus 26 Nov 2002, 6:17 AM
Not bad at all-original too, in a way.
Interesting...
Have you read 'Koko' by Peter Straub?
I have a really nasty feeling that this poem could well apply to me in thirty years' time. It's incredibly beautiful, but not what I need at this time.
hobojo on Johannesburg 2002 by Blue Magpie 26 Nov 2002, 6:32 AM
This ecco's my sentiments - we should not be surprised when we are attacked by those we flourish off of. This is written quite well - S4L4 - how bought "that arizes when people live with disease; and polluted airs cause some to gasp and to weeze.
Yet another atrocious posting - however this time you get a 1, as it is marginally better than your usual litter.
Caducus on some deleted poem 26 Nov 2002, 4:23 AM
Fate is cruel ! Nelson now has thousands of Pidgeons shitting on his arms (oops I mean arm) I liked this -7-
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