Bachus
on Liar by Goose
25 Nov 2002, 6:04 PM
shhhhh. 9.
i wont vote because i dont know who in the fuck you're talking about?! and frankly...i refuse to.
what? are your mirrors still on strike? remember what happened to "stubby" or was it "stumpy" in tremors? he died a horrible death. he exploded. here> have a ten! i think you deserve it.
oddly charming. BUT NOT HAUNTING ENOUGH! just kidding. try the wheel of fifths.
i like it 7
Funny and disturbing at the same time.
Is this "found art"? Its so demented, it could be real...
What idiot thought this was a cello? Gah.
you should be asking yourself is a virus really living or just pretending to.???
trippy. a fine narrative. well done. now, over the wall with you.e
mr. stallone read this and wept. vin deisel read it and smiled ironic (not that he got it, he just does that so he doesn't have to open his mouth) i read it and drew the line between our obsession with muscles and idiots with one liners "you are one ugly mother fucker" not you...that's just my favorite...lets all take a moment to remember..hanz and franz are truly fucked now. 8.
I liked the last two poems of yours, but really....you can do better than this
if you're left handed..why write with your right?.the problem with puberty? pre-sense of humor, and in all honesty teens go to the movies to finger bang third cousins and lower class man and then let their friends digit smell. in other words farting is not aloud stinky.
if you think you're clue-ing someone in..the jokes on you.
"die-anetics" but volcanoes and lava are so symbolic. point. show them how you control the volcanic side of yourself and they'll buy your book, or die trying..have an eight cuz i haven't.
so what? still gonna say you're seventeen, and insult my fucking intelligence. if so i will lose all respect for your abillity to write such impressive poetry for your generation, because this is not the poetry of your peers it looks like oil in water. i dare you to have a seventeen year old decipher the layers of this poem to you on a level of maturity that the poem represents...oil and water..you are a horrible liar.
was it reall neccesary to go with that name. it makes it completely impossible to take anything you write seriously or give a shit. that's why i don't.0.
Not bad at all. I like it.
cute
I have never loved a poem b4 this one - it envokes so many emotions and pictures - brilliant - 10