Ranger
on Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore
26 Nov 2002, 1:34 AM
So which twats gave it 0?
I like this poem-although the title doesn't really work. Something like 'Wraith' would be closer...
I didn't even notice this was a haiku on first read. Very nice. :)
Actually, considering the state of mind he's in right now, I think it sums up everything pretty well.
It needs a bit of work, but hey, so does almost everything
i'm not sure what I think...it's different...5
if you weren't such a fucking idiot i could find it in my heart to see the humor in this piece, but unfortunately you are, and therefore i wont ..your constant chinese water tortured attempt at satirizing hip hop shit music and artists only than to try and somehow catergorize 'other certain peoples work' with this kind of psuedo pop psycology you have going on in your paranoid skull muscle only proves my point, being that it's a horrible sign of the time when the 'so called "voted in"' best poet on this site has to turn around and stoop to this kind of worm shit level of thinking and projection?!....even with cookies to trade you wouldn't last two seconds in a big city's county jail. unless you consider suburban halfway houses some sort of test of manhood? you should stick to your beers and loveloss contemplation it works leagues better for you, and i'm sorry to say that your depiction of street reality is painfully bias and inaccurate...not to mention tainted by your own inability to gain any real credibility in life or art, and razorgrin was right when she said your sense of humor is your greatest flaw, but hey! you write real swell poetry, and you got that going for you.f
And I thought it was just Dark Angel who wanted to get the worst poem by upsetting people. How naive of me...
Sorry for using 'cain't'...just couldn't resist using the ol' Southern accent (even though I'm English). Oh no, I'd better run:-I think I can hear Maria...
Good good good.
I don't know if I like this or not. Like the 'Mississippi mud sky', though.
alright. here's an 8 because i know a good shower cam when i see one.
more people will read you if you change your name to "cuddly polarbear stuffer" honest.
you must be from my city! I like it...dead on description of small towns
Blade'll love this
There once was a young man called Blade
Who's poems were crap and depraved
His poems ain't swell
Because he cain't spell
That uneducated young man called Blade