Another Bobjim?!?!
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 4:43 AM
Come on. He deserves at least 7 for persistance.
oh please ewww sickly sentimental
Hey, I've just had a brilliant idea! Let's all kick Yardbird until he stops spewing crap and appreciates a poem for its content (sorry Rich). Anyway, I don't think it's pretentious, just original. Have you ever considered writing a full length story-perhaps something like Lord of the Haemerrhoid Rings?
Ranger
on Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
25 Nov 2002, 4:32 AM
Has anyone read my last comment re Yardbird (on Childe of my Buttocks)? Please consider it to apply here as well. This is the funniest thing on poemranker and is worthy of a top two place-if not number one.
Sweet Jesus, you really are obsessed. Did you type all these, or did you just shortcut copy them? GET A LIFE!!!!!!!
Shall we all vote 10 to get it to the top? Or shall we give it the minus five that it deserves, and hope it burns in hell? The choice is yours...
Genius. But what happens if you do that in word?
I quite like this-it would go well to a Black Sabbath tune (can't remember which one though...) I agree that the first line needs adjusting 8/10
indeed depressing and lonly and almost pointless in its solitude but to be honnest thats just all pretentious crap and this is in fact a great poem craigus nightingaleus
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 4:59 AM
this is crap.thats all i have to say on the matter
Hee hee hee. You've really outdone yourself this time, Yardbird. Immensely funny, yet a frightening amount of realistic potential
(Don't ask) 10/10
Wonderful fun. Is 'ran my local council up' supposed to be 'rang my local...'? Ok, now I'm nitpicking.
Great fun.
Brilliant!
If 'AIDS in a van' was good, it would be good.
Shep, is this an attempt at an autobiography? Is it?
Hmm...interesting. Not worth 9, but not as bad as 3 7/10