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on Frayed Edges by ShellBell7799
21 Nov 2002, 4:55 PM
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Hey, superman, why did GW take her poems and run away? Is it DA's fault? Should will kill him. This is a serious loss for all of us up and coming poets at poemranker, eh.
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no feeling
amen.
too wide
It's nice to see one of your poems here. You're really very talented. You should post more.
you first. you know how i feel about you, but i'm going to be a big boy for a minute a rate this with no bye-ass 0. lol! naw just kidding here's an eight...because the titles cool and it's all around well done like my eggs benidect and fresh squeezed orange juice..you know it's 85 degrees right now in sunny california..slice of papaya? anyone? 8. mayne add a question mark with an exlamation POINT! for overall stamina down the stretch aye.r
until tomorrow, or nothing...so it should either be oh my love. or change last line to until tomorrow...maybe? who knows? there are about four or five brilliant sentences in this poem, like the hair thing and umm the hell yesterday part and Zephyrs and moors are loads of fun...there's alot of shit here too, not saying i don't suffer from the same hangups occasionally in my work, just be aware is all. ,here 8.
If nothing matters, then it doesn't matter that nothing matters, so why worry about it? I think the REAL question you should be asking yourself is "Does a stone wall stop a blind woman as surely as one who sees?"
Also, a) it's not a slash, it's a more of a gouge, and b) almost nobody has the willpower to gouge their arm deeply enough to cause enough bleeding. So stop writing fucking shit suicide poetry until you actually know how to do it.
it is very good
i feel your pain
here something to staunch your bleeding http://www.bakercourt.com/den.htm
now you can't say i never cared. hope you feel better?
yup, that's it in a nutshell.
You win.
damn
what's the wwe?
yes. you're right. how could you've. dickdent.???