poetandknowit
on some deleted poem
20 Nov 2002, 4:11 PM
Are you really 17? Because if so I am feeling quite smooth criminal. Pretty good stuff. Right-o.
you're good
I wish I wrote so
Best on the site tonight! Burn baby! BURN!
lolita. SHUT UP! SHUT UP! go.e
al the other smurfs left. he just needs closure. whatever that is.
Tell me more about this "soft, pappy mouth".
I hope you fall over and injure your beak.
Perfectly wonderful. My son named the dog Euripides. He's black like that.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
20 Nov 2002, 3:22 PM
that's the ticket, this is a very good piece.
But I would attatch the last line to the stanza before. A ten for this.
I liked the flo of this very much, and your diction is lean and sinous and in general this poem holds much promise.
Also, good title.
Do you ahve a website?
this is a lyric sis...do you want to come perform on tuesdays at level one on wilshire..i'm booking there now..i had something eclectic in mind jazz, improv..straight up blues and other stuff..call me at the house.. i'll fill you in.
You can't save the world mom. But thanks for pointing us in the right direction. Obvious but I liked it anyway.
if it wasn't for chlamydia i probably wouldn't be able to wake up in the morning. certain burns can be motivatationally inspiring, and in time one finds certain acute pains to be quite tolerable like a good case of clubfoot, gout, or the "missing butler" blues. we all know you really sell hot dogs on 83rd and broadway d.a. fucking hack-kneed psuedonym. you got a little mustard on your vest...here let me get that for you..boop.p
LOL. _____help us all if you ever become unleashed.
do you even know the difference between "a" and "an" or are you wearing that name tag so i wont forget who you are? cheapslut. i heard you pawned your ant farm for a training bra and speech instructor. goodluck and best wishes."
i would but the doorman keep calling me mr. culpepper and hiding my car keys, could we meet at the circle k saturday for ding dongs instead? excellent! i'll put it in my organizer..okay? right after buying crickets and before getting fabric softner..
Don't axe this, it spans many people. Not just goils.
Oh great king of the wierd pile,have a coke and a smoke.
I stand corrected.
P-dummy's done. Now how about Gay-lo and Spitney beers?