Mutant_X
on Thoughtless Deed by craiggiarc1971
4 Nov 2002, 7:28 AM
i give it a 6,still need to improve i guess but it's a good work though
Nicely done!!! Jrtails, you iz goin DOWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dis poem is da bomb, wickywackwickwackwock, but dat Scottie Dog is one dumb geeza 4 turnin da dd ho down, i agree wit da rosiebailey, he is 1 fagget, but wespect 2 da poet
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
4 Nov 2002, 5:49 AM
Maureen bloody Lipman???
Well I'm confused, any1 else have a clue what thats all about?
Nice build up though
Well the first 2 verses are a blatent rip off of the Ted Hughes poem 'the hawk', and you're all fools not to notice.
Sublime, it brought a tear to my eye and a hand to my crotch
Wespect, dat Taylor is one hard homeboy,wickywickywack, yeh
You could have at least used salad cream you uncultured swine.
I think Lecter would be proud.
Yeah, that movie rocked. Sang gospel for weeks, we did.
Actually, I am somewhere between underweight and almost healthy, medically. size 1. you're fat, settle, or should I say: Count Chunkula, Rolls-Royce or Flabar the Elephant King.
Actually, one proudly showed me the $50 Lenin badge hat she got. I laughed. Ours are worse than yours, nicholas.
In fourth grade you still wrote better than the general populace here.
The Nebikaneeza alone deserves a 10.
who stood in effigy for him? why not do more with this? it's amusing...
Logun, just what in the name of all that is covered in frosting supposed to mean? oh yes, I understand now: it means you're a weiner.
fix the typos. we all know it is hard to let someone go. show us why.
there are very strong emotions trying to come through. give them room.
my favorite line:
"burned pink candles to pretend they were your body."
so sensual, but needs tightening.