rosiebailey
on The Limerick of Dave by worldsofwar
4 Nov 2002, 4:03 AM
crazy man dat is crazy man
to hell add to hell at the end and it would be a sonic sonnet..here's a 7.
This doesn't make sense. Not to sure about the scansion, either.
Haha, Yardbird strikes again. No mercy!
Genius. Pure Genius. BRAVO!!!
You need help man, but in a good way. As long as this anger gets released through poetry then it won't actually be released against people. Good thing seeing as I go to college with you!
Hell yeah!!!
Suburbia is a good subject for poetry. Thank god I have left it to live in the big city of Swansea.
oh yeah yo is da man and so is paul daniels and his ho debbie, they are so fly guy that dey have a wellard tv show on da telly. dat is so phat i big im up when i see im on da telly an e is well ard when e says "and that and that and that" when e is doin a wellard trick, one day i wanna be a well ard magig man lijke im as he is da man and so is you so big up to yo and yo homies
This poem fell out of the end of my bum. That is my it is so smelly - because my bum is often unclean.
Hell Yeh,G,ur poem is da bomb, and i is gonna get me one of dem phatass morris minor rides so i can reprazzent all ma crew from da hood,BO!wickywickywicky,RosieBailey in da house, big it up beatch!
Word,homie, u got sum hardcore beats on ur ass, and u is like well lywically talented,Wespect.
Dat maggie thatcher ho is one hardass honey, but she aint no Debbie Mcgee, if u catch ma flow...aiiii!WickyBOBOwack,Da freddy is ova and out,YEH!
a bit strained but, i liked the last line and the confinement of it all...here's a 6.
the fifth line deserves a nine by itself, i enjoyed this read, because, of not only the acorn, but the sense of pan. and loveless songs to the infinite.
YOU LIE! i see the ring from the bottom of the well! THE RING! and little girls with wet hair and horses and carlos castenada and snoopy? unfortunately this was extremely boring, but the ring wasn't..thank god for naomi watts. watts upo!@ 5.
And this is why I end up looking like a working class hooker!
Hannibal Lecter would be irate!
erm.....ok...
Ahhh G, dis poem, like weally bwought a tear to ma eye, Big it up 4 ur madskillz.U got sum soul in dem words man.