Wistful. Very lovely.

nice.

I STILL HATE YOU THIS POEM IS UTTER RUBBISH

Spelling mistakes and typographical errors should not be made on a piece that is being submitted on the internet. I kinda like the concept but words aren't as vivid as they could be. You need to be a little (sp) stronger in the middle of the poem.

I love it. I felt every line, it seems you put your sol into it. I would love to know your inspiration for this one?

Not what I expected from the (misspelt) title, but a well pieced haiku nevertheless. Take this 7, and use it well. And yes, I am a pedant.

I bet you thought this was a good haiku when you penned it. Sadly, you were wrong as wrong can be. A pointless piece. 1. Pap.

I actually rather like this. It's certainly true, and it has a directness that's appealing - very different to George's literary style.

Again, very true. But Christ became angry in the temple - is he going to go to war like George Bush?

By the way, are you really a professor? Should I call you Prof. Doug?

You make me sick!

Very wistful indeed, surprisingly for you. This is lovely.

And this bastard went on to become my Latin teacher. He is immortal, and Herakles has a lot to answer for.

believe me, you'll get over it.

truly bizarre. the australian cliches roll out so fast it's hard to keep up with them. if you're really australia, i'd be shocked.

"jeremy spoke in class today..." strangely effective, while derivative.

How nice, it took two days before the edit came. This really does amuse me -- the endless revoting, not the poem. Not to imply that the poem is bad. It just isn't a funny poem. I think I may have preferred it as it was last time I voted, but then perhaps I recollect awry.

Very good poem, contradictive statements kept me motioning but the last three lines put the whole poem in perspective.

Very good poem, contradictive statements kept me motioning but the last three lines put the whole poem in perspective.

mouth breathers are evil.