Bachus
on The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog
23 Oct 2002, 4:02 PM
see that children...da's back on top again..thank's to this brave new mexican cad..hiccup.i'm sorry lol!i fell of the wagon good night!
doesn't ring any bells to me, but than again you're the road-scholiar.t
This is borderline plagiarism. You should be ashamed. Go find your own voice.
are you trying to garner the top 3 worst spots?
if i were -=Dark_Angel=-, i'd be shakin' in my boots right now.
Nicely finished, but the piece as a whole is blunt. 5. Your language is not evocative enough to truly engage the reader and force them to empathise with you.
no..it's tether ball with the smurfs in a raquetball court somwhere in ranchocucomunga, cuz if it's noon it's west coast..here.here..toast!
"jesus can turn sugar into cocaine, and score more goals than wayne gretzky"- kingmissile early 90's band.
the end saves your ass. 6. barely. i fucking despise mr.bogs, but on this occasion he's right...even though he plays with lite-bright, and raggedy anne dolls.
okay well here goes..i just wanna take this opportunity to say that -=Dark Angel=- is well..my hero, and the more of his poetry that i, myself, and the rest of us digest the better of we'll be mmmkay..and his pet monkey is currently reading better, and mankind is safe mmmkay..and it's..alright that this miserable cad tlb has dethroned the lord of the "prawne" the "poeme" the "an", the "gay blade", the "poop deck" "the nude", the ever popular "embrowning", and many, many, many more philosophicaly stimulating jargon tweaks not to mention the esteamed "BEAK" and the "out the window" the "breaking of wind in the masters chamber"...not to mention bum attacks to the enth degree [internet poets around the globe murmor] [in agreement] furthermore i demand that we as theologians, satanists philosophers and alchemists take a closer look at this 'work of art' (mr. bog's stain above) at its shape and 'wordplay' the way it strikes deep into your soul and says "hey we're okay..give me a hug, and by the way THE OCEAN IS DEEP FUCKING DEEP!@ DEEP MOTHERFUCKER! WANNA FISH WITH ME BITCH...HUH WANNA FISH ...WITH CEMENT SHOES? FIND THE SIX STOMACHED SHARK YOU LITTLE FUCKER! I'M sorry oh jeez..i fell horrible.it's just that well..i'm sad and sorta lonely.i didn't mean to yell forgive me?..you know..i'm tired and sick man just so god damn tired you know it used to be so much easier and now look at it..it's deep and complicated LIKE THE OCEAN! FUCK YEAH THE OCEAN WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! YEAH! were was i again ? oh yeah sad and worried about..well you know life in general...lets take a MOMENT to pray ..sorry.. um lord jesu..we are sinners and fornicators and drunks oh lord...we are bad through and through..the whole lot of us..lord could you please FLOOD US OUT..YEAH FUCK! BRING IT ON MOTHER FUCKER!~ YERAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Your plural of 'monkeys' should exclude the apostrophes. I like anything with monkeys.
good luck at the lucrative world of pro rapping. i heard there's a real market these days!
lol. i think? or you could be the devil? forget about it.
This is the funniest poem I've ever read. You rock! 100%
Their is a very warm and kind
feel to this poem. very good. 8
and this was necessary because...?
Cease your preaching and use your newly found spare time writing much better poetry than this please. You state the obvious, badly. 0.
well..you got me to laugh, and it's really well written. only one or two typos that i could recall, and an interesting twist..did you know that the word "god", comes from the word "gored" after the boar gored you know who in his side in the garden, after that they called him the "gored one" and then that became goed then god! trumpets blast and herald your beautifully told tale...not all muscular half gods were twits, take theseus for example he was strong fast and very intelligent...but hercules was indeed an ass..
poetandknowit
on George Bush, Jesus Christ, and the good ole US of A! by dougsoderstrom
23 Oct 2002, 1:12 PM
They are not always at war? Since when? what papers do you read?
Christ did not retaliate,
hockey is full of retaliation,
christ would not have been a good hockey player.
well, yeah, maybe christ was just a wuss!
why?>'