Almost funny. Almost.

very nice. 8

part 3? part 3? lol! wow! you leave tons to mystery with the first two. could you please jettison from your vehicle soon, on i 75. thanks.

Redundant.

That's not much of a revelation.

Not a bad effort. 6.

perhaps than you are a FUCKING TEN LB. GALLSTONE SQUEEZING YOUR TINY FUCKING HEAD OUT OF MY URETHRA AND THEN plop tidal wave from the toilet...legs fly out from under neath me..me head cracks toilet...u.p.s rings doorbell...WHAT! WHAT!..."sir we have your anrthrax right here"....pie in my face. you sir are tasteless..

you're funny, but not like pooh with a handful of honey.. you want a duel..go get your snaps..it's on to lasvegas.i'm the king at craps..seven, eleven or haven't you heard..i'm in your grandma's bathroom and i'm doing the bird..but not to over step my highschool brain..that's why they call me Lord Celophane. Bitchh

Now there is good use of deductive reasoning. Say, have you read "Stupid White Men" by Michael Moore. If not, pick it up for a laughs and rant. It rivals Molly Ivins for pounding the state of the nation.

This sucks even upside down! Are you trying to be someone you are not? Good try!! Keep up the positive spirit!! Call out to poets!! Long live poetry!! Hear, here!!

bitter to the last drop. delicious indigestion. lose the !

i love you for that, tint

Alright who is Unity?

i'm reading ulysses, but that doesn't in any way impair my appreciation of this slam. damn.

Had you posted the last one alone, a 7 beckoned. as it is, 3. Immature poetry has it's place - but it should at least amuse.

Good ending. 7. I needed a chuckle.

Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah. Remarkalbly boring, this series.

Come on now. You know she enjoys it.

Sometimes those who we most love, we most hurt, because we feel that we must share with them what we feel to be true.

Truly a violent edge----without a doubt!