Hmmmmmmm.

even better now, mrs.g

Nice and uncomplicated.

Ok Blade, its quite good really. (your still a cad though,)

suspiciously strikes me as too soft-sounding a word, but i love the implications. very good.

Break the cycle if you can, don't let yourself be used. A horrible situation

Having never been to Stockport, I can objectively say this is a fine example of a discriptive poem. I love the way you represent Engels humanity. You are excellent at sense of place, a good influence on me. What are chocolate digestives?

Oh well, you made me laugh! It's actually quite good.

The last one's good, the rest, not so.

Yeeesh. I don't like 'deep penetration' well I mean I do like deep penetration, but not in your poem. To pornographic, or something. I don't know, just turns me off. Idf she's the women of his dreams, why is he cheating on her?

If they would just stay seated at the children's table. Maybe nentwined can create a Kiddie's Korner for them. I can dream can't I?

sounds like a lovely place to saty away from, nicholas. here, have a 9 for being so convincing.

Well, Its a funny reflection on teen life. A little blunt and insensitive, but I guess thats us teenagers! Good

Good, except a whole poem about a gunshot? If it were dedicated to someone who had been shot for a good cause it would be very good. However with no personal background it is a bit boring. It would be better if we knew the person who had been shot.

Ver amusing.

Another winner there Mr. Cat. Your use of visual aids is original. Why should a poem be about words?

I see a theme running here. A commendable effort again!

Good.

Too long.

amen