I was really liking your work till then. You sir, are a cad!

I've come back to this. Will he dare? He would have to, wouldn't he? Or what kind of a man is he?

Excellent. another great contribute form godswife. Very descriptive.

'Tis wonderful, very witty.

I was really liking your work till then. You sir, are a cad!

This is oficially the wirst poem, yet i shall vote it as I would a piece of art, as it is.

Excellent detail about the fashions of the 90s, and a great mordant ending. This is one of your toppermost.

Last line- perfect. Tinkering does pay off.

Very good. Stockport is the arsehole of the world isn't it?

Very dark. Very effective, Well done.

Wow. Very haunting actually. Really makes you think amout your mortality.

Oh, come on. Forgiveness ring a bell? Get over yourself! People take themselves far too seriously these days.

Well worth the patience of reading this. A commendable effort which is very retrospective.

Quite average actually. No depth of character or history. Could be anything which in some cases is good, but here it's just vague.

You are one sick puppy. Cool ideas, though!!!

Haha, such wit. You are truly gifted!

Scary, yet great! Well done sir!

Daer God, a new poet laureate surley! Well done.

I was really liking your work till then. You sair, are a cad!

Hmmmmmm. A reasonable effort. It requires reading three times though.