he's his mama's sunshine. sweetest cherry in the apple pie. Make him show you how he does it.

You have out poemed the lot. Delicious as figs in cream. Golden threads are not easily broken. I wish I had a girlfriend. To lay my face down in her hair, between her breasts.

I'm afraid we do only allow posting of your own stuff, as best as we can restrict such.

HUSH YOUR MOUTH BABA YAGA I THINK THIS POEM IS ACTUALLY VERY GOOD SO F**** YOURSELF DANG.!!! ANYWAYS GOOD POEM BLADE :)

Deep.

i can almost relate to that

Liked the poem, but hated the comment preceding mine.

god we aint all exellent writters you know why do u guys gotta take the mick out of blade man he hasnt done shit to u damnn....

isn't that nice. spoiled brat. i bet you got what you deserved (in your 'vast' mind. i'm sure the best is yet to come. don't underestimate the overestimated. it will come back mutated and twice as sly. watch. nice poem though. 7. p.s no one really gives a shit about what school you went to, or abusive nuns...just ask jim carrol over a a little 'boy' in the alley. you could have a double doctorate in jelly bean counting and make your point just as well. just an observation. no disrespecst. oh by the way..your huge in my huge mind.

i think this poems great u guys is it gods'wife yess hello? i think this poem is really really good seriously i do email me if u wanna chat at craigdavids_girl2002@hotmail.com

match tip the sawdust. my prediction? number nine in worst section within 2 months, at the latest. unvotable regurgitative pelican spew. you'd be better off just scanning the comic book page and posting that. atleast we'd having something in front of us worth reading.

why? she states at the beginning what and who it is from...it's not like she's blatantly stealing..she's sharing, you twit..obviously because of some problem with the way men view her boobs subcounsciously & figuratively speaking of course..email me a chest shot sweet heart, and i'll decide whether or not she should stay, and or keep the bees. i am an excellent judge of these things, and very open minded., lol! all the way down your 'pants'! signed white knuckle phillip aka. the duke of dungerees. please?

spiritual moccasins.... uh huh...

silver, who puts a fence INSIDE? think before you write, man.

i think you should post work that is your own

"To know for certain poetry does exist." and lives. and breathes. and grows. good work, mrs.g.

(as in, please delete this or I'll flag it as plagiarised...)

The middle line speaks to me on several levels, suprisingly. I'm in a sensitive mood.

See Untitled III.

somehow the last line didn't work on me the way i wanted it to. still brilliantly spun. 8.'