A truly great poem. It sums everything beautifully. I wish other people {Nicholas Jones} were as good as this

very offensive, you sick twisted man

Actually, this is bloody good.

See what can be achieved through not stealing song lyrics!

Bollocks. He nicked it off of the Kinks.

I've got to go now. I'll have words with you later.

Trul beautiful Short, Precise and moving

Excuse me Tarquin Del Boy Toilet. I agree with devina. Stop critiscing everyone, when your poems are rubbish and don't even rhyme. Don't you have the time to make them rhyme (By the Way(by REd Hot CHili Pepers) that did rhyme) Bye

A clever rhyming poem with different parts of meaning involved within. Truly breathtaking...

I'm sorry i didn't see this poem sooner. I love the poem you have writen here. It's an interesting perseptive, and flow. 10/10 =) And I can't wait to read more of your work =)

I calls 'em like I sees 'em. I'm sure she's lovely in person, maybe i am really nice and like kittens and hugs. that said I'm saying thus far she seems like a ditz with a piss-poor grip on english and an auto-fetish for blondness. As for writing from the soul, nothing wrong with it. Doing it badly on the other hand is a nasty evil. I am somewhat offended at your rude name-calling. I'm quite mannerly, I took into consideration that she might have just picked up English. That's all. The ignorant one is more bothersome. I don't think you know much of me so that judgement might be somewhat premature. Why should I keep my comments to myself? We do have the right to free speech, even towards foolish people. thanks! jesus loves you!

I fail to see how you can write about anything other than that which you know, even a complete fantasy is known in some way by the time it is written. Ah well that is just me.

With this club you're not affliated, This line is an inversion, not really a recommended technique for world shattering poets.

I agree this is an extremely gloomy prospect of a poem. Poetry is meant to be full of happiness and this is full of darkness, very dissapointing....

Absolutely bloody brilliant (and i don't usually say this) The way you include the atmosphere is superb, an overall fantastic poem!!!! All people who think different of this deserve a hiding!!

poetandknowit, you're a dumb, boring dink. Age does not necessarily bring wisdom, as you prove. You embarrass yourself and amuse others. Lord I wish that kid had gotten you right in the pineal gland with that AK-47. you might get some insight through that new third eye. I like this poem.

That's really damn good. Short but says a lot.

Pay no attention to jigg. I'm not usually one for this strucure, but damn fine work.

There is poetry here. Of course there is. But it's not very good.

I think there should be a comma, if not a semi colon after "thesis bound" Politics always seemed a lose - lose game to me.