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Reuben Spiteri on Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore 8 Oct 2002, 1:14 PM
great work....
poetandknowit on some deleted poem 8 Oct 2002, 2:24 PM
Last line should instead read: Kermit the Frog said. It would make this halfway interesting.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Weep for Dead Heroes by Tascobar 8 Oct 2002, 1:56 PM
what no feedback no reverb. no syringe. perhaps an oatmeal cookie down the wrong pipe.
Limness on Smoking Clitoris with PHD handles by <{Baba^Yaga}> 8 Oct 2002, 3:41 PM
cravat. you mean cravat, don't you?
poetandknowit on Smoking Clitoris with PHD handles by <{Baba^Yaga}> 8 Oct 2002, 3:52 PM
change friends to peeps.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Charlottesville by New Life Drug 8 Oct 2002, 4:12 PM
Forget it Jake, -- It's Charlottesville. Oh... I... *weeps* DAMN THAT COUCH! DAMN IT STRAIGHT TO HELL! 0/10
decadentlaurel on some deleted poem 8 Oct 2002, 4:57 PM
ooh. 10 since im from vancouver bay and days dont rhyme.
poetandknowit on some deleted poem 8 Oct 2002, 2:21 PM
he is a TURD. Yes yes yes. With all those periods it took me two hours to read this. I could have been working on your poem.
Reuben Spiteri on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 8 Oct 2002, 1:15 PM
perfection..... beutiful poem
Bachus on why i look like a man by rosiebailey 8 Oct 2002, 12:29 PM
you have way too much time on your hands. if i were you i'd donate it to some fucking starving nation in the middle of a desert. cuz it's doing us no fucking good here. apparentlyz
Tintagiles on some deleted poem 8 Oct 2002, 12:30 PM
'Wrecking ball' takes a half second to work. 'Takes no holidays' a bit longer, because it seems a bit out of place, but it works in the end. The 'I know your...' bits are excellent.
Tintagiles on Trying to say by persephone6358 8 Oct 2002, 12:36 PM
Dear gods. I cannot imagine why Hades would ever want to steal you away. I think I'll go warn him.
god'swife on some deleted poem 8 Oct 2002, 12:38 PM
I remeber reading this, what, two weeks ago? It was no where near as good as I remember. Is it my mood or did you edit this? So much clearer.
Bachus on some deleted poem 8 Oct 2002, 12:42 PM
THE BACHIAN TRIBUNALS pick of the day. why i will not say. okay...this once. cuz it makes me feel tiny and hated. and cuz it gives a great rim job (cave kissing is kuel) we should hide now. before chassidic release our shabbas goy to the lions pitted. the lamb has been spitted. spiteri &rossi asti spumanti. jonestown coolade for the afterglow.s
Tintagiles on It's time you get here by devina 8 Oct 2002, 12:45 PM
I think it's time you get out of your house and start looking. Yeeshus.
god'swife on some deleted poem 8 Oct 2002, 12:54 PM
You are the kind I'm looking for. Peter O'Toole in Lawrence of Arabia, executing the man he saved from the desert. Only better. Do I own that kind of couragous love? I doubt it.
Tintagiles on why i look like a man by rosiebailey 8 Oct 2002, 1:01 PM
Either you're a genius like -=Dark_Angel=- or else you're an utter idiot. The jury's still out.
Reuben Spiteri on A Musical Dream by vulcan 8 Oct 2002, 1:02 PM
nice one.. one of ur best i think vulcan...... and thks for ur comments
Tintagiles on some deleted poem 8 Oct 2002, 1:03 PM
There you go. What's 'mujer', by the way? I understand the rest of the Spanish, but I don't actually speak the language and haven't a dictionary handy.
god'swife on some deleted poem 8 Oct 2002, 1:06 PM
I get the feeling I know you from somewhere. it's the way you speak, so familiar and pleasing. there's some pretention in this poem but I don't believe it's intentional. Odd how this is sort of a companion to my Untitled III. He kept my heart in a velvet lined box. Interesting. "The oh, don't worry" line feels abrupt, and unnecessary considering you'll never tell her about them. How would she worry?