great poem brennan... I felt the emotion with each line 10 for ya :o)

nice ending

Agree with Z, this is better than 1

Rawk! 8

Did you change this? Was feathery air and tickles in there before? I am not so found of those. But I think a mast can mourn. Is personification completely dead DA?

Har! 7.

You gotta love Jeff Buckley, and this poem is great. A little bottle or two is damn right. I saw the man play in Bristol in 199-something and he was incredible. My Makers Mark habit started that night. Anyhow. Glad your show went well.

Interesting. I thought this was about not making a thing perfect.

As a gentleman I feel I should look the other way while you girls get on with it...

I was always one who approved of swearing in poetry. Vulgarity can also be beautiful. It's kind of vague though, you might wanna specify the kind of shit you're frustrated with. :o)

this comes across a little too simply for my tastes. i see where pnk's complaining about the show-don't tell. However, I wouldn't be surprised if that's the intent, making a cheap thrill out of this poem entitled cheap thrill about a cheap thrill. Which would elevate it some -- a really good cheap thrill.

That is beautiful. A tear has fallen. Scale not big enough.

Very nice; perfection is impossible and not desirable. Is the 'score' a reference to the very idea of rating art i.e. exactly what we're engaged in here?

Pretty good poem, but NOT a good plan ;)

Another good title would be "The glass is half empty."

I enjoyed this and thought it had merit.

I like it very much my hardcore-superstar. :o) She's really inspired you a lot hasn't she? And nentwined, it's not kiddie porn. Silly. :op

Hmmm-not too sure about this one

I do so love a good mess myself. :o) 7 from me :D

Nice 1 AG...