some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Sep 2002, 7:26 AM
laughing my arse off. this sounds just like my gay boss! so, was it the printer?
Soul nomad. Beautiful.
ha! superb!
Not as good as the other two so far
Thank God. Now you can get out at talk to people. Or at least to the birds or soemthing.
DAMNIT! Every time I get an idea to write about something some damn bastard beats me to it! GRRRRRR!!!!
HATS OFF THOUGH! Can I still do....
Thats funny! I really was feeling a war. Then that door-thing spun me good. Fun. I see the pattern too.Thanks for teaching me.
Simple but effective,and humorous too! Do haikus really need titles?(rhetorical)A season would have worked with this. i'm obsessed with seasons.(Ithink my wife did that to me). Loved it.
Cool. 575 but you have to feel for the season ,Ilike that.
Very enjoyable and thanks for the nice things you said about my clock, it means a lot to me. Sometimes it is all just tock! See part 2 just published-oh 10/10 by the way.
Sad and lovely treatment of a sibling relationship-9/10
This is either genius or rubbish (like The Streets). Not quite sure yet.
Is the one very long line deliberate? It is a provocative move that attacks our bourgeois expectations. I think the deliberate spelling mistakes create a sense of naivety that is appealing.
Another corker. I'm definitely in the shabby chic corner myself. I want to work entropy into a poem.
Hmm, the old if a tree falls in a forest does it make a noise conumdrum. The answer in this case is yes. This is an ironic deconstruction of the solipsism caused by the atomisation of society as a result of neo-liberal free market economics. Or possibly just a beautiful peace of whimsy.
I like the idea of wanting to disbelieve but being unable to. Not sure about the 'do know' construction, though. Otherwise, very nice. God has not talked to me in the phone, but nor has the Pope, and I think he's real. I suggest you go to church on Sunday and see if anything happens in your soul.
Very good! Funny. You're worryingly preoccupied with clocks though. You want to watch that. (Geddit? Oh ha ha). I like this very much.
I think I would lose the last couplet and the word 'fiction' and then this would stand as a perfect statement.
Offices the world over have just been witness to this same conversation. Why does it matter that the boss is gay? All bosses are like this.