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vulcan on Tears by Birdman42s 8 Sep 2002, 10:43 PM
your poems are all good but this one still better
vulcan on 7-11-02 by durk 8 Sep 2002, 10:23 PM
Bravo!liked it very much.
darby pyn on The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog 8 Sep 2002, 6:41 PM
and you call sweat shit. what are you 10.
OneFingerAnswer on untitled #2 by darby pyn 8 Sep 2002, 8:54 PM
Good job. (Check for typos though)
horus8 on BEAKBOY, A Tale Of Suffering by beakism 8 Sep 2002, 10:38 PM
i concure, mighty bright...francis bacon has let the swine go! 8/10!
vulcan on some deleted poem 8 Sep 2002, 10:22 PM
Nice!6
darby pyn on some deleted poem 8 Sep 2002, 10:41 PM
reminds me of L.A. in the late 70's which is the idea I think of a good poem. to evoke forgoten memories.
god'swife on BEAKBOY, A Tale Of Suffering by beakism 8 Sep 2002, 10:44 PM
Hurrah! Well written, well executed.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on The Battle by Birdman42s 8 Sep 2002, 10:49 PM
neo sporin couldn't fix this with a mothers kiss and an add campaign by johnson and johnson. you fail. amputate immediately than pray that you never have yo do battle with a real writer. fraud!
vulcan on some deleted poem 8 Sep 2002, 10:50 PM
Not very poetical,just a point to be considered.(you know how to write poetry so you'll succeed)
vulcan on some deleted poem 8 Sep 2002, 10:53 PM
The end was the most interesting.6
god'swife on Flame by Rlee 8 Sep 2002, 11:17 PM
O.k. please explain to me how you made the judgement call on this thing. I know you have anonymity and everything but holy jeez, you should be embarassed. <beset us both on ...> Beset means to attack on all sides, to assail. As in we here at poemranker are beset with awful, dreadful, bad, yucky, smelly, stinky,stupid, poor excuses for poetry. WRITHING COMETS!!! WRITHING COMETS!!! Comets neither writh nor are infinite. How does a key unfold something?! It unlocks, it opens, it reveals. I know I'm being unduly harsh but I'm fed up. TORTURED STAKES?!?!
<{Baba^Yaga}> on some deleted poem 8 Sep 2002, 11:27 PM
it's late..i'm tired....traumatic day at reahersal..i will leave a detailed comment tomorrow...not that you care or love me anymore...bastard...impudent SALAMANDER! why do you torture me so? our parents would have been proud. i'm proud. and nude.......goodnight....9/10!
darby pyn on some deleted poem 8 Sep 2002, 11:59 PM
it's funny because it's true. brilliant.
darby pyn on some deleted poem 9 Sep 2002, 12:01 AM
it's funny because it's true. brilliant.
vulcan on some deleted poem 9 Sep 2002, 1:13 AM
Original!I needed to read some poem like this!thanks beloved!(no impertinance was meant!)8/10
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Untitled # 93 by nightii 8 Sep 2002, 7:53 PM
The children mentioned have nothing to do with it, do they? You just said 'children' to make it more profou^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^Hsorry I'm not supposed to comment on your poemes.
vulcan on The Battle by Birdman42s 8 Sep 2002, 10:27 PM
(to grin,i think?)liked it7
vulcan on In my heart by Birdman42s 8 Sep 2002, 10:33 PM
the 2 last sentences sound clumsy when read together.just a suggestion"and my heart's will be forever"or any way you like to cahange it.simple and tender.
vulcan on Untitled # 93 by nightii 8 Sep 2002, 10:36 PM
"graceful desperation and rusting reflection"are very good!Bravo!7/0