Tascobar
on The green mile by Ming T. Merciless
4 Sep 2002, 3:14 AM
Oh dear. Having been impressed by some of your earlier work, I feel only disappointment having read this dire effort. 1/10. Come on Ming, surely you can do better than this!
Not as good as you other longer one I'm afraid-6/10
Very direct, and I like the steam imagery
I agree its serene -8/10
This is good-would you really sit near tourists ?-8/10
In the crowded parks in central London you don't have much choice.....
this has nothing to do with me,,,unfortunatetly...my friend settle is just damn good atbwhat he doers...writing...i'm glad to see people interested...you are a beyond alluring writer..and i missed you..i hope you'll come back as yourself...your friend jeremi..10!/
"the spontanous overflow of powerful feelings!".I liked it esp "a welcome from reality".In general highly original.
Alors, le Renard Blanc. Bon d??guisement. Avez-vous les documents?
7.magical effect!
This is a stronger piece than your others
It has a longing tone.nice!7
Interesting!6
7.magical effect!
it goes frightfully beyond that christoff... unfortunately i think that you would have to shoot one of his minions(about three times) to get the total feel of the insanity a'foot. good eve.8/10
Not as good as tip-6/10
Great Poem!
I like this, it has a real freshness