tout est perdu fors l'honneur!n

Reminds me of a Third Eye Blind song called 'Wounded', which I really dig. Not sure about the 'Hooray, hooray, hooray' bit, but great images and overall I like it very much. 9/10

varium et mutabile semper femina.

Why do we fuck your country up? Because you let us, and your price is low. America has financed and perpetrated more acts of violence and genocide than you'd like to count, senor journalisto and you know it. I pay attention to the news, dear, and that's what I've been seeing. Middle East, anyone? You claim to not be a nationalist, but from what you've been saying it sounds like you'd blow dubya if he'd unzip for you. My mistake about the slaves. Canada has its problems,(never llet it be said it doesn't) but we have a hell of a lot less than the yanks. The halifax thing mystiofies me. why halifax? I visited once...

you know what? i can dig that.thanks, i'm going to go write now, but i can honestly say that you have a great gift and overview. i can also say i respect any human that takes the time to teach anybody anything especially children...i hope i didn't offend you with the stereo type it's just...well..jealousy, and she's always raving about you, and you're kind of an easy target....all that aside, your writing is thought provoking and i suppose does deserve to be all over the fucking best catagory like a shotgunned forehead....jesus...well what can you do...the chicks go nutty for it..the kids tilt their heads like a dog detecting an odd noise...it's almost unsettling..congratulations and thanks again...i suppose. see yeah. good luck!s

i just tossed that in with writer. i could of went forever, but i started screaming out loud and standing on my chair and bellowing, "polish the furniture" "windex the see throughs", it was getting ugly...besides the lines of reality for me these days are converging all into oneanother colors,sounds,words,fenders,hogs,petunias,monotheism, theothism, thismthism, and even the toilet swirl ism....is controversial?hardly! luv h.s

Actually, no I do not. I simply called you on a hasty generalization you made stating Americans were murders who built a country on slavery. I have never killed anyone. Sorry. Yes, we had slaves in our history, but I believe they were primary responsible for agricultural growth in the south post 1830, and by that time industrialization, which propelled the US and Britain and France, etc, etc (sorry Canada) economically, was still a zygote. And I believe Canada was also guilty of slavery for a time being. And you were not so nice to the all Indians always. la de da. Am I on your level now? Do you understand? I never made a personal attack. That would be saying something like you smelly stupid bitch why do not you shave you pits...well. I was merely calling into play you education, because you sound a bit naive. Sorry, I am not being vague. My points are clear. You just get back into a corner and spout "oh, you redneck, hick no-it-all." whatever. Some recent pubs for you. American Prospect: Summer 2002 Subject: Income transfers. Forthcoming: New Republic: subject: LA School system and Roy Romer. There you go sweetie. Don't hurt your brain. And what is the point of writing something ignorant to piss people you call idiots off. So you and the buds can giggle. I am done wasting my time with you.

because it fucking pisses me off. i stick to my guns! god damnit! and i don't think you took the time to realy apprecite the work.and yes, but when am i not (i assume as real writers we still have balls! and cunt juice enough to really muster some courage to comprehend why we write?!){fuck, i'm not the first there's other people doing it here too} sensetive? your the fucking back bone, i'm the rib! and so what if you praised those fucking nasty old writings of mine...(just using the tools in front of me)i hate every fucking one of them because..i can now see through them...its hilarious...i was fucking kidding myself walking around talking about the power of poetry (23,24-year old's dreams), and i wasn't even scratching the surface! but now HAH! i've succumbed! dark angel and razorgrin pushed some of my buttons (month and a half ago in new york),and alot has changed, i have changed, i went broke, i'm scared shitless about my future and the future of my family, i don't sleep, i can't eat, i feel as the hoof of pan galloping and my writing "has never been so fucking crisp to the infinite and unobtainable realms of "ignotum per ignotius"...in irony..i'm at the end of my rope and i've just found out that there was no rope to begin with....i will enjoy this fall and cuz i was falling all along. there is no bottom, and yes my cilia are a little FUCKING sensetive. that is all, la belle dame sans merci.....<brought to you by 'futon' all you need to realy wear a shoe, and 'forked' why get fucked when you can get forked>?a

Ok instead of your usual charming little remarks about what you think my educationmay be (a variant on the grade school 'your brain is as big as this bug") why don't you make a point? You say you'd do so well in a debate, but meaningless vagueness and personal attacks don't hold up too well.I was merely stating the impression that you give. Sorry your mighty jounalist sense of humour doesn't approve of ours, but maybe a little absurdism can be a good thing. You haven't said much of anything in regard to these elusive 'issues' you keep mentioning. You just make snide pseudointellectual attempts at insults. Face it, you're a pompous, dull, hypocritical bore and someone's finally called you on it.

viva la difference!!

See what I mean, instead of saying anything worthwhile you make a personal attack. I am sorry, I do not wave a flag, I am not a redneck, I have never been to a rodeo. I would destroy you in a debate. What to you bring to the table: a GED? You have limited knowledge of everything you say. Instead of finding out what the other side believes, you make assumptions. This is why liberalism gets a bad rap. Because of you people. Here I fight to get points across in regarded publications and you defeat everything I am doing with your uneducated banter. You could not defend against my points because you are clueless and finally someone has called you on it. You and your weak poet friends sit up the in Canada bitching about this and bitching about that but you do not understand the reason for things and thus, you make hideous overgeneralizations and sound ignorant. And I'm sorry I never made it past the a team and sexadous, both childish. And my sense of humor extends far beyond what is amusing to pseudo- intellectuals who think they are being clever.

I have never apoligized for my poetry, forgotten or otherwise. Why are you so sensitive? I commented. Is this as good as it gets for you? Far from. All your remarks have been unhelpful and abusive, why is that? I mentioned Babbitt once. I have praised you a million times. Go figure.

you are of course aware of how dumb it is to argue for this long because of a flippant remark designed to piss people off as a comment on a flippant poem designed to piss idiots off?

Well written. The experience of reading it on the computer added to the poems authority. Each word revealing itself from the right margin is symbolic of the poem revealing the heroine bit by bit. And the heroine learning who she is step by step. Very pleasing and relivant.

your writing: what does it "prove" you do? drive.have bad, boring relationships. sleep. yup, you do a lot.

Yeah, fucking hypocrites! Nice jab, h. 9/10! How about another line, beginning with 'If you're such a poet....... '

voila tout???

WHAT SUBJECT!!!you have made no mention of a "subject"! I read those publications and many others. Still no point!!

Jesus, you are truly and idiot. You do not even you how bad you sound when you try to go deeper into the subject. And if you want to read any of my work I can direct you to the New Republic, Mother Jones, Utne Reader to name a few. Quit watching CNN. Ouit it, quit it. Please read a credible book. Write something credible, and then talk to me. You are truly stupid.

dum vivimus vivamus! 8/10!