Guys, guys! Look at us! Squabbling! Bickering! Like children! What's happening to us? We never used to be like this!

Your poems have an easy flow. This is good work. 8/10

poeteandknowit: I don't know why this is coming up as often as hunt and fuck fuck fuck. Just be glad that the barrage of hunt and peck is being diluted.

A powerful piece!7

So, I take it all the zeroes posted here are because I don't share your opinions about the Great Satan who isn'T me. And here I was thinking that the poetry on this site was voted on based on the quality of the poem and not on what it says or what the voter thinks of the author. Silly me.

I'm pretty amused that I'm getting english lessons from someone who put together this sentence: 'You'd even applaud a poem he wrote by opening a dictionary and with his eyes closed picking out random words he would string together in the order he got them in.' Everyone makes typos, but you stung that together intentionally. P.S.- You're awful, why do you bother talking? Just as you bitch that it's assured that Razorgrin will like my poems, it's assured that you'll bitch about her liking them. It's one of those "Viscous Circles". A real sticky situation.

Not a person of profession "embalmer", the band Embalmer. Hence the non-pluralisation of "Embalmer". I doubt many actual embalmers write about lingering, painful deaths.

You, my ladd, could stand to learn something from Settle. Not only was his childish poetry more finely formed than yours, but he was able to respond to absurd personal attacks with sneering rage, as opposed to the weak, you-too retaliation of Ming T... See me after class.

Goodness me, babbit11. It seems you have been crowned King of the Best Poemes Section, occupying as you do all three 'top spots'. Perhaps you and I should have some sort of Battle Royale to settle the score between goode and naughty once and for all. Will you duel, or are you a coward?!

I have indeed succumbed - it was that German chocolate cake what made me do it! BTW, here's a slight twist to try on your next batch of Avgolemono - add fresh chopped parsley to the broth and rice prior to adding the eggs (nice color splash & enhanced flavor), and use the juice of TWO lemons... mmm mmm, lemono good! And thanks for the compliment on my hair, I really was having a 'great hair day' yesterday. Hope they do a good job on your cut ; ) 8/10

I read your "crying beside a lake" your style has a moving force.my friends have gone too far.poem is in some parts confused,but never0!5.

Vulcan... It is just the game between me and the words. The game that could convert into "the violence" over the language. But in this case "the violence" would be just a language purifier. To do "the violence" over the language just means to deliver it of unnecessary junk. Words are disobedient raw material, a haughty whore,... and a poet is a personification of the aggression and he's arrogating them with somekind of "force" - a phallus is the thought, a vulva is the word... Why should I be forced to build on the language of others? On the language, which is overloaded with tradition... This is a brief interpretation of "my violence", I have no idea what kind of violence you've had on your mind before you commented me to cool down...

how did you know about my lemono soup lust? are you greek too, or a mad mongrel mixture also? my grandma back east made a mean lemono soup....you're already that much more fascinating now. stop it. i can't take the memories! nah...i'm sure the cut will be fine..anythings better than the shoulder mop i got kickin right now...thanks muy mucho. v luv h. m

What's wrong with stringing words together out of a dictionary? would sauron object?...would gandolf the grey put his head down in shame?...nay! i thought we were about educating the beakless, and shoeing the hoofs of the down trodden! you elitists make me gag on the shaft of gribbler...you force me to wheel chair my angst and murmur timmy', timmmmy?, tim tim tim timmy. gobbles? gobbles.......read.less.kill.more.pacify..>>>>>>>>the tit of cthulu! milkit>

A ha haha. A ha ha hahahahahaha. Oh, kristenk69lover, does the moon not rise with a sad face? Do birds not fly in olde disgrace? Of course not. I suggest you take THAT into consideration the next you dare to comment on my poemes.

Pfff. What a waste. You had a perfectly good poem about lightning, and you had to ruin it by turning it into a metaphor for love.

Actually, Ming, I know people who have AIDS. I'll thank you not to speak so lightly of such a serious disease. You are a disgrace to this site, a digrace to the human race, and a disgrace to yourself. But most of all, you are a disgrace...to America. USA! USA!

Sorry x311!bother you too much.in your "Guide me"you are at your best.9

Cool down!for your violence 7

well it is true. and what the heck is wrong with nepotism unless the name Bush is involved? bah, I say. Bah to K??dresh!