-the pain- discribe it! -the dispear- Describe it. Aaargh this is frustrating! You repeat yourself over and over and still reveal nothing. what did he do to make you trhink of him as strong? DISCRIBE IT TO ME!!!! Read poetand knowits poem titled "work"

Simplistic. 0

delightfully convoluted, yet clear.

so, what do you do for fun, other than lend an ear??

Defines new parameters for poetry in the post 9-11 world.

alone again, naturally.

i love that dance! dance often, my friend!

This isn't a poem, it's advice, good advice, but no poem. Read Rumi, read anything. How do these precious gifts present themselves to you? What do YOU mean by society ?'progress'? too vague.

Lots of comments no votes. I'll give it a 3. not your best

peter porcupine is a bored house wife with a cock and balls midrift stare. he's a cad and a deep throat who wets his bed out of self respect and chivalry. that's why i respect his opinion like floored toast. bon appetite piker. look down! see that? that's my 'hoof' mocking at you. don't make me fill you full of kale. you couldn't handle the flavorless calcium blast. you are a muted clank.missed.s

Caught mommy and daddy going for it huh?

Firstly, let me warn you, there are subscribers to this site who are going to insult you as you have never been insulted before. They're on a crusade to element the world of bad poetry. Don't take it personally, although they will. Secondly, this poem is pretty under-developed, (that's why I'm warning you. The minute this poem crosses their path they will jump on it like it were wounded prey)so I suggest you start at the beginning. Read some damn good books of poetry, Pulitzer prize winners. Here on this site you can read Babbitt11, Cristof, poetandknowit, zzinnia66. Horus8 and Bachus are also good writers but they're more political. Anyway, your poem doesn't portray anything other then feelings. Where are you, what does he look, smell, taste, act like. What did you do together. Read a poem, they don't look like this. Flesh it out.It takes years of dedication to write well, most people never will. I'm not saying you shouldn't try, but putting pen to paper does not a poem make. Nothing personal but this is about as bad as it gets.

Repetetive and predictable. 5 dolla no holla. Shit this joke is probably older then you.0

Thanks for the news update. Have you thought about starting a political/poetry zine?

thanks for you input ... i assume you did read it, so why assume "it" was a "he" and how did you come to the conlusion that it was to "one" person . . . one of the lines is about "you who are too many to count" ... i don't believe that people need everything spelled out for them ... so - as per my username - dealwithit

it could be argued that sucky is one syllabel and one. you fail. nice sensuals though and an interesting title. 7/10! mojave.confound.avuncular.babble.o

she will never love you as much as her sleep! nor even as much as thr fragrant and detatched armpits of sodding peasants! other than that, i'm okay, you're okay. nice piece.

A little dull, but I liked the message nevertheless

A good reflection of the manifestation of boundaries within or morality perhaps?

sleek.