BD - I'm guessing you meant for the last line to read 'tilted', not 'titled', yes?

I'd want to sell anyone who's defining characteristics were "Smiling and biting" too. P.S.- Shel 4 Life

Could've been good if you tried. 0/10

This is downright cute! Got a chuckle out of me.

Thanks ever so much for that little lesson of yours. however I'm already well aware of what bella donna is. You know nothing about what I know about music so I suggest you just keep your little comments about it to yourself, because nothing that I write has anything to do with the name that I've chosen. Once again, it's just my name for this site. I think you just like to see your name on the screen and you needed an excuse to write a comment about me. My suggestion is to drop the petty bullshit and just worry about yourself. Have a nice day.

This poem is confused. Seasoned meanings? O.K.... I have to give this a Zero. p.s. I was thinking about your previous comment regarding my poems being anti-men, and I realized the poems were so far from that. Untitled- is about the ectasy of the God/nature experience, Queen Anne's Escape is about the suicide of Anne Sexton, and The Hiakus are about the feminine aspect of creation. Were's the gender bias? Maybe your just afraid of me.

Bravo Bella Donna, sometimes the folks on this sight can get over excited. Pay no attention to the fools behind the curtain. Seems like your healthy and smart enough not to let it bug you. By the way this "poem" is terrible.. 0/10

I love you, will you marry me? I've been wading through so much unbelievable mundane trivia these peon's call "poetry" Bless you. 10/10

The 2nd stanza is fabulous; I would get rid of S1 and S3 and start again, work off S2.

The 1st paragraph gets a ten. The rest doesn't

you not only have a small,mean, short-sighted heart, but your also not a poet this is a piece of bad writing 0/10

What the hell are you talking about??? And you two up there! Stop arguing! Jessy Crow, you folx go through some fierce mood swings! Do you even know WHY you're arguing in even the most remote sense? Can you concieve of how fundamentally pointless and peripheral this dispute is? I mean, you're arguing over weather a dick is a man! What the hell??! Who cares!? The ORIGINAL statement which got all this gadding nonsense started was that "elves are androgynous pussies", which is an opinion, but one that is phrased in such a way to be intelligible by our language. There is nothing wrong with that statement on a pure, fundamental level. It makes sense. What is does NOT do, is beg any debates about the definition of sex organ gender. Cripes... I hate to be the whiney Mom on this, fellas, but the madness has to end. Obviously the "Aragorn Only" thing isn't gonna work out, which is nothing short of a big downer. Oh, and now that I'm riled up, two points, both for GodWife, there: One, I'm pretty sure Tolkien elves aren't ACTUALLY androgynous, I'm pretty sure there are distinct boy and girl elves. Two, you said up above that "Gender" is a clinical term? I THINK (I may be wrong) that "Sex" is actually the clinical term, where "Gender" referrs to the social baggage and all other more intangible aspects of one's man/womanness. ie- The male sex has a penis. The male gender always leaves the seat up. Oh heaven... Quite a state of affairs isn't it? This is how we use the wonder of communication. I'm gonna go wash.

This is not a poem. It's an epic. I love you. You're one of the chosen. Nobody here will get it. But I do. It's always the same story. The public is so lost in it's own bum-hole that they can't see it. I've seen them on their deasth beds struggling to hold on completely oblivious. You know how to live with the grace of a true lover of wisdom. Grace be with you.

Just kidding.... I'm sure you're a well ajusted man/boy/male Gender is all about organs and chromosones. SEXUALITY is everything else. Your SEXUALITY is diffucult to define, your gender is not either male/female/hermaphrodite that's it your limited to 3. pick one!

Bacchus you are over the top and quite humorous with these little rants. I'm still not sure if the poems are plain prejudice or genuine social commentary. I suppose it is all in who is doing the reading.

Anytime you start a poem out with something weighing on the "soul," you are setting up a scenario of melodramatic failure. The whole "Woe is Me" style seems dated and our language gives us so many other options. I understand the sentiment is genuine, but the actual poem is a bit youthful and doesn't really amount to much but a good attempt.

yes, we have heard of her. we also know what bella donna is, and what it's used for. since you've so named yourself, why not find out all about it? it might give you a better understanding of the music. (was that better frass? it's a second draft.)

I'm not really certain I understand this one.

For a while I thought, "Why bother going around and posting 'I don't get it' everywhere."... but It's worth a shot. What's going on here?

To little to late. It's been over for hours. Don't br such a dick.