Tarquin De La Bog
on some deleted poem
22 Aug 2002, 10:10 AM
It's not too obscure; I got it. 6. Not a bad effort.
DA - oops, sorry, my bad
that's too bad.
Don't you think you're being cliched for calling them cliched for calling you cliched?
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
22 Aug 2002, 9:55 AM
i'm giving it a 1 because of how annoyingly it's set up. don't make me scroll side-to-side!
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
22 Aug 2002, 9:58 AM
how long does it take you ppl to come up with these insults? and what is your purpose behind them? and how old are you any way? i happen to be of fairly young age(17)not that that is relevant, but honestly you cant think of one good thing to say ever? this poem happens to give alot of insite into how most teenage people feel. not that you care, and dont you think you are being cliche by calling me cliche? its no wonder no one can get anywhere in this world with people like you around
Sex organs are classified as either male or female or both. that's how it's done you idiots. I happen to have a degree in guess what? sexuality. It's what i do professionally (and as a hobby). I'm serious it's what I talk about all day long. Any questions? My dog are you folks un-informed. i mean this is basic you boy me girl why? because you have a penis and testicles and I have a vagina, uterus, and clitoris etc., when the coroner cuts you open and takes a look at your insides he will speak into the tape-recorder and say; reproductive organs female and/or male.
Babbit11:
You must be from Kansas? I'm from Junction City, Kansas wher I lived for the first 23 years. Wakeeney-----I know it. "when the last elements of light divide to find darkness"----Very nice indeed!
I will put on my site my poem (Tranfiguration) If you would like, share with me what you think.
Thanks, Doug I gave it a 9+
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
22 Aug 2002, 9:53 AM
huh? i have to go brush my teeth.
Monsieur Bojangles, It does not matter how many nerdlings love Mr Tolkiens trilogy. It is still ubscure and inless you read it at a star trek convention most will not understand. I do believe in elves though.
I can see that this one may be too obscure. It was actaully inspired by a piece in one of Jeremi's poems, regarding women (Asian prostitutes specifically) who save themselves (cherry) for marriage by engaging in only anal sex (starfish = asshole). Just an image I got. Maybe too obscure though, huh?
An organ only has a gender of its own if you get down to the chromosomes. The shape of it is what identifies you as a boy or a lady. Even that is a fuzzy definition if you get into hermaphroditism and its variants. Gender: ya got meaty bits 'tween ya legs. take a guess and have fun with 'em.
god'swife, I don't think you quite see the point I am making. The point is this (correct me if I get any of it wrong): there is a property called "gender" which most humans have. This property commonly has the value 'male' or 'female'. This property is, I believe, a composite property, consisting of among other things, hormone levels, type of reproductive organs, etc. Now clearly this property is not one than can be had by sex organs. There is another property which also commonly takes the values 'male' and 'female', and this property applies to sex organs. But clearly the properties are not the same. That is all I am saying. I am not saying anything like "there aren't male and female sex organs". Do you see?
Have you heard the Splendour of Gold argument for the existence of God, my childe?
Are we calling each other by first name now? How fucking delightful!
Very poor. 1. I especially dislike the way you've repeated the first verse as the last verse. Whether it was to add emphasis or for some other reason I don't know, but it smacks of schoolboy poetry. The rest of the poem is simply dull; there is nothing in it to interest or engage me. Go away and do much better next time.
ooooohhhhh! you know I counsel adolescents right here were i live who are doing the same thing. Maybe you should give more of a clue in your title. Plus our cherries don't dangle.
Ok, so literal cherries don't grow on a vine, and figurative cherries don't dangle, and it's a tad obscure. Me thinks I should delete and try this one again, hmm?
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
22 Aug 2002, 9:46 AM
ok, but does your boyfriend know about the guy you're going to bang in Texas? is he the poor sap in the picture on your site?
I gave you a 5 because that philosophy is what all great literature is based on, but your not suppose to come right out and say it. This is more of a motivational speech then anything poetic. were's the poetry damn it all to hell!