Truth in concrete letters

Cute

It moved me, hellacious acres.

Is seeking or fnding the green emerald the better ? You decide.

Good 7/10 the title is bizarre

great topic badpoem

Yahoo! Praise! And serendipity too! Samurai-related serendipity... or as I call it, "Samuripity". Yeah... sexxodus was a labour of love all right... I can't claim sole authourship, but I think my penmates would like to see the love spread around. They have a... THING about that. It can get pretty gross.

your poem suffers from rhymningitis. The only thing to do is put it to sleep, before it kills again

I'm sure i don't understand this but i like it just the same 8/10

See, that's the thing, I don't actually feel that way about your poetry. The whole comment wasn't sincere at all, that's what I was trying to say earlier. Either way, all I was trying to say was that I enjoy constructive criticism much more than something just left to put down either me or the poetry. I can take something away from the criticism, but with comments like the ones you left, no one gets anything out of it. Unless it makes you feel good, in which case, would you be so kind as to complain to yourself?

even my herpes are wretching frightened running away from that mouth and that danct...to vague...lacking that wich makes vague compact poetry acute...you sir should obelisk squat immediately..

I expect my Final Thought to be "Oh *$@%!"... No swearing, I'll just say "Oh Asterisk Dollar-sign at-symbol percent!" Anyway... Dark- Ok, so elves live in the trees and look like Leonardo DeCaprio. You would too if it would get you elvan booty. So maybe they are a touch puss, but the point is... I forget what the point was... the point now is Liv Tyler is hot, and Aragorn's got all o' that (as they say), ergo, he is sweet (and he didn't even have to put on a dress or braid his hair or anything, hence he must be SUPER sweet). God's- Ok, I don't really care if rambling sets in... it's just fun to be all "Shut up and talk about my poem guys!". You know? Though I really don't agree that the Haiku's that obscure... there's a pretty big fan base for them books, doncha know? And the 'Feature Motion Picture' and all... Less obscure than a poem with no clear meaning (not a bad thing, but a common one... for me anyway) in a sense... since the meaning is quite clear (Aragorn is sweet). Razor- No talking about my penis. Ok! That's that. Pretty soon I'll make a sequel I'm sure... Look for "Gandalf is real smart" soon.

thisisnot apoem thiIsNOT apo em. this is a foot straight up the ass of poetry.

thisisnot apoem thiIsNOT apo em. this is a foot straight up the ass of poetry.

thisisnot apoem thiIsNOT apo em. this is a foot straight up the ass of poetry.

do you read poetry?

18 10's wow there is no sauce like hunger! This poem is awful. How much of what? you never explain what this is about? Ghosts and demons flying loose on wings of siren's what's the emotion behind this! Sirens are mermaids are they not? Anyway regardless even if they had wings why would anyones bugaboos hang out there? this is so frustrating. Take a writting course 0/10

Well here's a whole lot of nothing to say.

yuck 0

thisisnot apoem thiIsNOT apo em. this is a foot straight up the ass of poetry.