Enjoyably morbid...race on to your destinations!

to personally aloof, how are we supposed to know what this really means to you? this is for you, not us. so, journal your burn elsewhere. or make it more available for us to enjoy also..

Or back to where it originatd from...the horse drawn wagon.

Someday someone will show you how to write, hopefully before you try again..

Look up haiku..please for the love of writing..this is barely even freeform..this is barely even bare....god let it fucking end...please. here i'll show you a real haiku.............ready...good....../memorybabe writes/what she hopes might be haikus/It's a shame they're not/..................see not hard at all, see, it goes 5/7/5. count or be eaten alive..better luck next time deary..

When my phone rings seven times then stops..that's satan saying ..goodnight my sweet child eating minion..on that note..i wish you all sweet dreams...

that was a first attempt. bad as it may be, it comes from within my heart and yes, someday i will learn how to write better. thanks anyway :-)

Oh... Well then I guess the no doubt already inferred answer to the first question is "No." Dangit, doesn't anyone understand?

i know this poem is not original but i just wanted to see peoples reactions to it.and dark angel i didnt delete all the other comments all i did was change it like you sugested and that deleted all the other comments made.

this poem is kinda good.i like it, despite what other people think.i dont get why people like b here can comment so much hatred about a poem.

I see you did not heed my most important suggestion! The title MUST be changed to WHORE SKELLINGTON!

it's not up to me to explain the poem's meaning... find your own meaning in it... besides, haiku is supposed to evoke a scene

A rather delectable haiku on what I presume to be a fairly tacky drug experience. I particularly like your use of repetition to hammer home your point with authority. 9/10.

I think a haiku needs to suggest more than this, which just sounds like a route planner. As an English reader, this means nothing to me.

This is touching but too personal - this is plainly written straight from the heart without any objectifying distance. We can feel the pain and sincerity but it doesn't really hang together as a poem. Brave though to expose yourself like this.

This manic, rambling style carries your obesession themes especially well. 7/10

i expected so much more from one of a witch's most trusted spell componts...use should eat raw a handfull of your names root, it could help your simplicity, "become".

If you can't enjoy yourself alone..Who can you enjoy yourself with?

N. Tesla used the staff of herme's trigamestus for so many more interesting developments. You should too. Develop, or bust the thermometer and poison the bare feet.

very nicely done. Bravo!